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Beatnik1979 commented on: Blue Like The Moon / song lyrics by Beatnik1979 1 year 15 weeks* ago* .: Thanks for the read, very much appreciated... not much of a singer...actually quite shy in that regard.... Was aiming at somthing that can be embellished in true “crooner” form... Ill definitely do a play through on soundcloud in future. thanks for your interest ! W. [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: What to Pack for Your Departure by patriciajj 1 year 15 weeks* ago* Breathless but not: Breathless but not thoughtless nor void of emotion - but full to overflowing. That is how parting should be. In the build up it felt like a parting that could most definitely end up sorrowful but the latter part and that shining last stanza has made the Reader both validated and empowered to walk in such light everyday. Thanks for sharing. [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: Blue Like The Moon / song lyrics by Beatnik1979 1 year 15 weeks* ago* There is quite a strong beat: There is quite a strong beat and cadence as this poem is read out, quite a fascinating feature of many poems. Here one can be lost in the moment, and have that n't lobby/entrance feeling after leaving the cinema and a world that had only recently enveloped all of yourself. Can't wait to experience it on Soundcloud! [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: minutiae by redbrick 1 year 15 weeks* ago* Thanks beatnik. I am glad you: Thanks beatnik. I am glad you aired that thought. The question is probably the most important mechanism of thinking, as far as human thought life is concerned. I could be wrong there, but it is compelling and does transcend language which can be very offputting for many of us who are not fans of the thought-gym. F. [ go to comment ]
Beatnik1979 commented on: minutiae by redbrick 1 year 15 weeks* ago* .: I like poems that ask a question. its engaging for the reader and illicits Thought transcending written word. good read! W. [ go to comment ]
Beatnik1979 commented on: Seeing You Again by lyrycsyntyme 1 year 15 weeks* ago* Shadow: the long shadow is real, my friend. They must have been special to haunt you in this manner.. A beautiful torture. The gravity is defined by the permanence of the loss. W. [ go to comment ]
Beatnik1979 commented on: Smells Like Inspiration by Beatnik1979 1 year 15 weeks* ago* Petrichor : The smell you are describing is petrichor...Its unmistakabl. A pleasant smell that frequently accompanies the first rain after a long period of warm, dry weather. When that rain hits the asphalt....pure rush of nostalgia. Its Bliss. Thanks for the read [ go to comment ]
Pungus commented on: Smells Like Inspiration by Beatnik1979 1 year 15 weeks* ago* love_light_dmt: Having ridden my bike today, the last lap it was raining on the asphalt. Was already thinking of my favorite scent prior, that plus passing folks mowing their terf so sweet smells like wheatgrass. [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: Last Confrontation by satishverma 1 year 15 weeks* ago* Your customary skill with: Your customary skill with this form and these phrases is highly evident in this poem. [ go to comment ]
Beatnik1979 commented on: You Aren’t Worth This by djtj 1 year 15 weeks* ago* Well done: Masterful and provocative [ go to comment ]
sudan commented on: سلام على الماضي by Thana-Darwish 1 year 15 weeks* ago* سلام : و أنا أسعد بهذا التواصل [ go to comment ]
Thana-Darwish commented on: الرمل by sudan 1 year 15 weeks* ago* سلام على الرمل يمحو خطى: سلام على الرمل يمحو خطى السالكين ولا أثر في مهمه التيه سلام على الشعر [ go to comment ]
Thana-Darwish commented on: سلام على الماضي by Thana-Darwish 1 year 15 weeks* ago* سعدت بمرورك هنا ورأيك: سعدت بمرورك هنا ورأيك الكريم سأتابعك حتما صديقي رضوان دمت بطيب [ go to comment ]
sudan commented on: the gorge trail by Miiranda31 1 year 15 weeks* ago* This story is great: This story is great You can read it quickly, but after reading it, you may stop to meditate a lot, and then come back to read it again. This story is great [ go to comment ]
sudan commented on: Vicious Cycle by Tortured_Poet 1 year 15 weeks* ago* " It's so hard to feel good ": Yes, you don't need to live with fear. You are amazing and initiative.. You have a butterfly soul. And a feeling thinner than the breeze [ go to comment ]