Our love is a rose
Smelling of sweet seduction
Beautiful, standing out in a bed of thorns
Cherished for being exactly what it is
Bold in its ways
Buds of truth, strength, and loyalty
Seeds of hope and faith
Stemmed from the roots of life
Blossoming with each day
Defeats the persistent weeds
A rose for every season
Our love never wilting
Roses against weeds
What a lovely poem; your expections and desire for love - but always the darker side threatening to destroy it. Yes the struggle against nature is well known especially when needing to cultivate a little culture. The same with falling in love so all consuming yet daring; loving to emmerse yourself in the delights of love and wary that this desire called love will disapear. Realy well written poem and I think your comaprison to the weeds of nature taking over is very dramatic and realy holds the readers attention. Great write and well worth reading, truthintragedie's.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
Thank you for such great
Thank you for such great feedback. The dark areas of love are captivating. Overcoming obstacles with someone, reaps a lifetime of rewards I never knew was possible.
**if it's an eye for an eye, then we'll all go blind.**
Enjoyed..
Enjoyed..