Candy Feast

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Theme Based Poems

yea im living in a world ; a world that doesnt seem that sweet ; but looking closer we can kinda get a taste for the treats ; and even though life can be sour i aint never eyed defeat ; cuz to me thats flirtin with death ; so its either a TWIX or treat ; im jus living my life CAREFREE trying to get that 100 GRAND ; ignoring them LEMON HEAD haters who dont seem to understand ; cuz wheather u live in hollywood or 5th AVE u can still make a stand ; telling (hershey) HER-SHE dont need no SUGAR DADDY as a PAYDAY plan ; but she wanna be a AIRHEAD and listen to these DUMDUMS ; instead of listening to a LIFE SAVOR who understands where she comes from ; cuz playing TIC TAC toe with ur life jus aint a good look ; wheather its sooner NOW OR LATER u jus gonna end up with the crooks ; & its been a struggle but i came from a ROCKY ROAD and been needed a FAST BREAK ; but im the type of niqqa whos vision goes beyond outter space ; pass our ORBIT and pass the MILKYWAY ; i make the STARS-BURST as i go my successful way ; and im the king of my path so dont try to slow me down ; cuz with my TRIDENT in hand u gonna know who wheres the crown ; dum fool ; u try to act tuff but u as soft as a GUMMY BEAR ; jus a over grown CRYBABY thats needs to go back to daycare ; & im tired of these fake SNICKERS who wanna pretend they MR GOODBAR ; lying to peoples faces trying to to hide who they really are ; when in reality they nothing but a little SOUR PATCH KID tryna live a double life ; its pathethic and type sad how they only see things in black and white ; cuz life aint sugar free so it doesnt have to be that way ; u jus have to enjoy the little things in life and ignor those SOUR SPRAYS ; & u will see that when the ECLISP is over u'll finally find ur gem ; so stop trying to act slim and shady cuz u aint no M&M (eminem) ; & when u finally go to college and hang around with the SMARTIES and NERDS ; u gonna see life as a new definition u cant explain in words ; cuz life is full of candy just there for the taking ; it just all rest upon who u are as a person & ur decision making . .

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Author's Notes/Comments: 

The Theme in this poem is candy ; i used 29 candies i think l i capitalized the candies i used in the poem ; see how many i used

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divysia's picture

lol wow....thats alot of

lol wow....thats alot of candy ..i like the way you mixed them in..it makes sense


i been there n back, Im happy to be back

Tjrnyc5's picture

lol ; yea after writing this

lol ; yea after writing this poem i was craving candy odee ; but yea thank you :D ; i might write a 2nd version to this in da future using other candies .