6 feet under not holding my breath

Failures and catastrophes
pushing me face down in the dirt.
I'm no seed to be ploughed under yet,
still the hole deepens.
The pushing and shoving
has got to stop but
how or when time forgot.
I won't back down
I've had enough but
it isn't over till I'm six feet under.
Then I'll push up those daisies from asunder .
But I'm not dead yet...
So, these glassy eyes
red with shards of layered crystal tears
turn towards the heavens...
I don't bother asking why.
I just know my lot in life.
I look into my plot full of decay,
fighting that damn darkness
called tragedy everyday.
It hurts to be so damn good
and be treated so damn bad
they say the devils greatest trick
is making you believe he doesn't exist
epic fucking fail!
Because, I pulled his fucking tail
now I'll wait to see
whats next in store
before I wipe his ass with the floor,
I'm not dead yet.
So look out
I'm ready to take some more.
Fuck you,
Fuck you to your rotten core.

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lillycheer12345's picture

Great piece. I actually felt

Great piece. I actually felt your words. Amazing. I'm speechless :) keep on going!!

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Thanks lil' ;D much

Thanks lil' ;D much appreciated! Hugss


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Beavis's picture

;-)

Great rant Dear!

RoC's picture

Damn straight

Where's that devil bastard at? I'll kick him in the teeth and punch him in the nose...
He does have teeth and a nose, right?


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Lovethatred's picture

WOW! this is great

WOW! this is great


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SSmoothie's picture

Awe thanks! Heaps! HugSS

Awe thanks! Heaps! HugSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Irockpoker's picture

Somehow this gets me all

Somehow this gets me all revved up :))) like it :)


irockpoker

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I'm revved up enough for

I'm revved up enough for three of us I think lol! Always more welcome to fight life's travesties! Thanks irockpoker ;) hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."