fingers pressed to lips

Softly, softly even before the air escapes to form the words,

Whispers pressed gently into silence 

They were all that could be given by the pale moolight

As thoughts, they were gifted to the stars for fear the moon,

so close would send them to you as beacons of light into your darkend heart.

 

it knew too much of us.


Left unsaid, the sentiments float in silence through the universe humming your frequency if ever you want to feel more than what was never said, under the pale moon and sent among the endless starss.

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PeterChristopherRaymond's picture

Eerie and evocative imagery.

Eerie and evocative imagery.

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Yup. Totally on point :) 

Yup. Totally on point :) 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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the kind of pain love rubs in

the kind of pain love rubs in your face ??? 

Not in My world My twisted Sister lol 

in mine they use a Louisville slugger

the run over you with the truck as they leave .

 

But What The Hell I still Liked The Write ! 


Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces

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Oh dear twisted bro the rub

Oh dear twisted bro the rub is after the truck! ;) xo 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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The 2 concluding lines were much liked Respected SS

sentiments float in silence through the universe humming your frequency if ever you want to feel more than what was never said, under the pale moon and sent among the endless starss.


©bishu 

 

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Awww thanks bishy! 

Awww thanks bishy! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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"...the sentiments float in

"...the sentiments float in silence..." OH NO, I FEEL A DOVE MOMEMT COMIG ON!

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Floating Among The Stars

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I said it so quietly no one heard

love spoken loses itself in drift

propelled exqusitely beyond

earth's holding. Shared

like silence that lives

between worlds.

,

Star

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Thats absolutely beautiful!!!

Thats absolutely beautiful!!! Post it, make it offical my envy swoons at the deftness of your words!!!! Bravo! Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."