Clarity Pyramids









midnight blue blanket

 do consume us wholly

you, raping bodies in death

"spill the light of heaven on me"







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Clarity Pyramid


(I didn't mean to erase your comments, Beeble. I hadn't realized I wrote it as prose instead of a poem. I did the other one the same way. Your comment wss appreciated, and thank you for your compliment♥)

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you raping bodies in death???

you raping bodies in death??? yes well thats like a needle in my eye with this poem! loved it all once I got over the unexpected! I am sure I had a very unenlighted reaction to it. but thinkiing about it... well done! hugss and BEST WISHES, SS

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Thanks Ssmoothie!! ....

Thanks Ssmoothie!!


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "