as I lay

open door's

As I lay naked, with all my scar's to see

Body cold as ice hearts black as thee ocean

Lost in a place where time cannot be erased

Now all I see is this empty space


Overwhelm with destruction of my thoughts

Nothing remains the same so life is to blame

Out here I feel the rain falling on my window pain

I face another day with nothing honest to say  

Author's Notes/Comments: 

what is it to feel pain, I will take it and turn

It into something positive. Dont let life get you down

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deepinyourdreams's picture

Nice write and... being

Nice write and... being honest with yourself gets you the farthest'


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Thank you 

Thank you Embarassed

J meek