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stockholm syndrome
tell me all the places that you hadn't touched before
my body is your petting zoo, my heart is also yours
Soaking up the silence as I morbidly adore
a pea on a plate fighting off a fork
I want to be your habit that controls you from the core
my eyes are for your sight, my lips are meant for yours
waking up in silence as I shamefully want more
a worm in the world a writhing little whore
tell me all the places that you hadn't touched before
my being is your clay, my heart is also yours
licking up the silence as I beg you give me more
a pea on a plate fighting off a fork
I want to be your muse, watch you wage your wars
my arms are your hooks, my soul is your lure
fill the deathly silence with my desperate cries for more
a cadaver in the dirt, a festering little germ
tell me all the places that you hadn't touched before
my body is your petting zoo, my heart is also yours
Soaking up the silence as I morbidly adore
a pea on a plate fighting off a fork
This poem paints a picture of
This poem paints a picture of wanting more for all the wrong reasons, the feeling of desperation, mixed with inner sadness.
The lines 'waking up in silence as I shamefully want more, a worm in the world, a writhing little whore' and
'I want to be your muse, watch you wage your wars, my arms are your hooks, my soul is your lure', speaks volumes.
Your poem is very
Your poem is very interestingly written; how you worked at your love and became moulded by your partner. Also writing about your sexual feelings and emotions very cleverly. Loved your poetry and your clever words making moving points about your rleationship. This poem is art you have crafted well; an enjoyable read and well written.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
“virtūtēs semper voluptātibus inhaerent ”
virtues are always connected with pleasures
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
This is very gripping...............
It draws the reader in and just keesps bashing him over the head. The title was an eye grabber too. Kudos to you Ms. Poet. truly kudos to you......... Loved it! Sincerely, Melissa Lundeen.
thank you very much!
thank you very much!