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loneliness is dreamt of
alone and full of tears
having people around, doesn't conquer any fear
that just intensifies the feelings
surrounded yet still in solitude
these feelings of sorrow displayed throughout life
needing focus to see what is right
unable to sustain another horrid night

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This poem reflects how one can have so many people in their live that love them and care, and yet still feel alone.


Any comments, good or bad, are welcome. Please leave a comment and let me know if you liked it, how it made you feel or what you didn't like about it. Thanks for taking the time to read my work. :)

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last updated 24 October 2011 - 11:58pm
©3 July 2003 - 3:05am — drkpuzzle
16 July 2003 - 12:37am — Wendy Jensen (not verified)
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I so relate to this poem. I think it's lovely

10 July 2003 - 6:06pm — Nikki Moore (not verified)
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This one it seems like you had some kinda distraction.You could put a few more meaningful words in it like that Desire poem.
Nikki