My demise

Dystopian love cascading tears of chrome and crimson lies,
Cutting and cussing my way through the harder parts of life,
Managing to only get by on faking it and biding my time,
Until the pain takes over and I meet my demise.

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kick.ass.lass's picture

I love your quirky style of writing!

Short but longer lines
Compact verses but complex themes and emotion
You write well and beautifully!
Keep up the good work!!
Nice job :)
Shay

AJaidov's picture

Thank you so much

I wrote it during therapy so it was full of a lot of emotion. I was exploring my suicidal thoughts I had in my past with my therapist and it just came out on the paper.