3rd Attempt at Haiku
Haiku comment:
Not everything/ In a meal conversation/ Is spoken in words
Still a few decent people left, I guess!
But don't worry. There's plenty of room for you inside the box.
This is TOTAL fiction, so don't take it personally! It is directed at NO ONE. By the way, I think I have invented a literary device I call the "wrap- around title". See my other example "But not Forgotten". Does anyone know of any earlier examples?
The problem with haikus is that you sit there counting the syllables on your fingers and occasionally they DO NOT actually fit the 5-7-5 pattern!
I couldn't resist the word play on "beholder" and "behold her". As Flip Wilson used to say, "The devil made me do it!"
I am really bored, can you tell? (I'm also really frustrated...can you tell?) I hope no one is reading this.
