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S74RW4RD commented on: in poetry’s parish by redbrick 3 weeks 4 days ago
Wow!  Double: Wow!  Double WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  This is one of the finest---and I do mean the FINEST---poems I have ever read on this site!  The skill with which you deploy the parish metaphor is breathtakingly EXCELLENT.  I am overwhelmed by your accomplishment.  This one of the most important poems on this whole site.
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SSmoothie commented on: Hung on a nail by SSmoothie 3 weeks 4 days ago
Thanks Starward Blessinvss Ss: Thanks Starward Blessinvss Ss
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SSmoothie commented on: Hung on a nail by SSmoothie 3 weeks 4 days ago
I posted an updated version: I posted an updated version because I accidentally didn't post the finished version. But I think it's right now. 
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S74RW4RD commented on: Hung on a nail by SSmoothie 3 weeks 4 days ago
This poem is both poignant: This poem is both poignant and excellent in its testimony.
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J-C4113D commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Two Young Men In Chikugo [ /;\ ] by S74RW4RD 3 weeks 6 days ago
Thank you very much for: Thank you very much for visiting the poem and for commenting.  I realize you are pressed for time right now, and I am very grateful that you made a time in your busy day to stop by.
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ramonathompsont commented on: My Vision by satishverma 3 weeks 6 days ago
powerful words and moving: powerful words and moving images. well done!
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J-C4113D commented on: Two Doors by Stephen 4 weeks 1 day ago
Excellent metaphor, presented: Excellent metaphor, presented in the most succinct and powerful format.  This, to me, hearkens back to the greatest of the Greek epigrammatists.
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Stephen commented on: Discovering Australia's Best Pokies: My Personal Favorites and Wins by MikeMellow 4 weeks 1 day ago
Australian free verse???: .
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Savvart commented on: It's Okay by Savvart 4 weeks 1 day ago
Thank you: I really appreciate you taking the time to send me a comment :)
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DelusionalPoet commented on: I SING by joy 4 weeks 1 day ago
very relateble!! Beautifully: very relateble!! Beautifully wriiten!
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DelusionalPoet commented on: It's Okay by Savvart 4 weeks 1 day ago
"they are only birthmarks of: "they are only birthmarks of a greater becoming" "The ground beneath you trembles because you are rising." Beautiful!!!
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patriciajj commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Two Young Men In Chikugo [ /;\ ] by S74RW4RD 4 weeks 2 days ago
You should try it more than: You should try it more than once. It works! The way you slipped the rhyme and rhythm into this little ember of playful seduction was sly and elegant. It a delight to read you after all this time. Rest assured that my absence is due to pressing obligations and not for lack of interest in this crucial series.    Keep penning artistry and the magnificence of love.   
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weepingwoman commented on: The Trivial & Boring... by weepingwoman 4 weeks 3 days ago
Addendums, Annotations, Footnotes... :    quotes that I actually remember the sources of or which book I read them in or where I might have heard it or who may have said it...    "The difference between the almost-right word & the right word is the difference between the lightning bug and the lightning" - Mark Twain  ~ "No siren did ever so charm the ear of the listener as the listening ear has charmed the soul of the siren" - Henry Taylor  ~ "Every day people are straying away from the church and going back to God" - Lenny Bruce... if you will permit me Lenny to add in "& turning their backs on the government"... that wall we've built between "Church&State" doesn't really exist... ya'll go ahead and keep trying though, I'll watch from here... no I will not hand you that brick... ~ "Let me remember that I look on the past to prevent the present from dawning on my mind" - ACIM #52:8 ~ "If I should die in my sleep tonight I don't want to have wasted today worrying about the tomorrow that will never come" - Author Unknown (just gonna file that under Words-To-Live-By) ~ "Democracy is Anarchy mixed with Polity" - Terence McKenna    
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S74RW4RD commented on: Discovering Australia's Best Pokies: My Personal Favorites and Wins by MikeMellow 4 weeks 4 days ago
What kind of poem is this?: What kind of poem is this?
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S74RW4RD commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Prayer On Matthew 2:11 by S74RW4RD 4 weeks 4 days ago
Thank you, Sir!: Thank you, Sir!
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