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Two Doors
from hospital bed . . . .
two doors
approached
the door to death
left unopened . . . .
a sense of sadness
overwhelms me
from hospital bed . . . .
two doors
approached
the door to death
left unopened . . . .
a sense of sadness
overwhelms me
Excellent metaphor, presented
Excellent metaphor, presented in the most succinct and powerful format. This, to me, hearkens back to the greatest of the Greek epigrammatists.
J-Called
first of all, welcome back,
first of all, welcome back, and I'm glad that open door was closed to you, your words and insight would be missed.
Really felt that Mylo! Liked
Really felt that Mylo! Liked the dynamic and the interconnection.
here is poetry that doesn't always conform
galateus, arkayye, arqios,arquious, crypticbard, excalibard, wordweaver
Thank you for your kind critique.
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