Not quite sure how to respond: Not quite sure how to respond to this. I do not want to discard the Second Amendment, and I hope the essay does not imply that this is the solution to the problem.
What’s wrong with what I wrote?: Manuevering from the tumultuous topic of psychedelics- especially prevalent in the modern west as ever before- to the vexed ridicules of sexuality- and all the stigma that goes along with it- as a reasonable plea to 'discard the second amendment from our eternally esteemed constitution!' you seem to have summoned the Dickhead in your varied narration as a philisophical substitute for the many-menegaried mind to chime-
Wow, what perfection in the: Wow, what perfection in the peace whilst in the midst of imperfect. Such courage of ownership, elegant, clear, simple and direct yet expertly crafted.
Beautiful surrender!
I had a friend some time ago: I had a friend some time ago who would skip their meds because it got in the way of their poetic angst and drive. Perhaps that intimation provides me with some hold of this poem.
Back in the old grandparents': Back in the old grandparents' house before the thing was finally torn down were several packaging boxes (U-Haul variety) containing several tens of notebooks filled with scribblings much like your "crumpled poems" as with the demolished house, rather swiftly discarded, while I was away at university. They shall never be read again, for sure.
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