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patriciajj commented on: voodoo puppet by humanfruit 12 weeks 2 days ago
Not sure if your new name: Not sure if your new name fits you. Your work is anything but ordinary: startlingly clever, sometimes enjoyably snarky and satirical and far far more than meets the eye.   I don't think I've read a more spot on, metaphorically blazing definition of this extravagant nightmare, this twisted nation "like voodoo puppet projects" or "sharp tools" swaddled in designer velvet. You're still a legit word wizard, my friend, and, as a nice little bonus, you voiced my own exasperation in the notes.   Delightful, acerbic, edgy brilliance.  
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J-C4113d commented on: Happiness Within by Savvart 12 weeks 3 days ago
Thanks for the courtesy of: Thanks for the courtesy of your reply.
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Savvart commented on: Happiness Within by Savvart 12 weeks 3 days ago
Thank you for letting me know: Thank you for letting me know your thoughts. Your comment is greatly appreciated :)
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Teytonon commented on: Sticks and stones by Teytonon 12 weeks 3 days ago
Thank you for your comment: Thank you for your comment. I glad you enjoyed it.
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J-C4113d commented on: Happiness Within by Savvart 12 weeks 4 days ago
Those last two lines: Those last two lines are brilliant!!!!
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uninvited_1 commented on: Sticks and stones by Teytonon 12 weeks 5 days ago
Creative write: Nice creative word play on this one. 
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weepingwoman commented on: I take umbrage... by weepingwoman 12 weeks 5 days ago
RE: to the guy who just pm'd me...: no I'm not opposed to it... everybody should do whatever floats their boat (or in this case jacks them off)... 
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J-C4113d commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; To The BoyFriend Of Seth---Who Loves White Socks And Despises Shoes by S74RW4RD 12 weeks 6 days ago
Thank you very much.  I spent: Thank you very much.  I spent far too much of the summer in a hospital, but I seem to be recovering (prayer answered), and the poems have continued to flow.  Thanks again for the kind words.
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Tetra_nova commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; To The BoyFriend Of Seth---Who Loves White Socks And Despises Shoes by S74RW4RD 12 weeks 6 days ago
Glad to see you're still: Glad to see you're still writing friend~Hope you're doing alright
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asaihati commented on: ليل مشدود ببراعة by esmat11211 13 weeks 15 hours ago
الف تحيه وتقدير : الحوم حول الذات منهاج المكتشفين   ولنا وقفات على ابوابكم نسترق السمع علنا نتعلم حرف ياتي بعرش بلقيس قبل القيام او قبل ارتداد الطرف   اتحفتنا استاذنا الفاضل عصمت النمر  
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weepingwoman commented on: Without a Paddle by weepingwoman 13 weeks 15 hours ago
Formless! : that's exactly what I was goin' for;) Thanks for stoppin' by_()_
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ramonathompsont commented on: ENJOY EACH MOMENT by joy 13 weeks 1 day ago
Advice I should really take: Advice I should really take more to heart. Thanks for sharing
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J-C4113d commented on: Footnote: Words For My Body's Declining Health by S74RW4RD 13 weeks 3 days ago
Thank you for the kind words,: Thank you for the kind words, with which I eagerly agree---that glorious moment will be wonderful.
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arqios commented on: Footnote: Words For My Body's Declining Health by S74RW4RD 13 weeks 3 days ago
Ah! Henceforth looking: Ah! Henceforth looking forward to that glorious moment when the corruptible shall pass into incorruptibility at the end of the Age 
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J-C4113d commented on: Unintelligible by Ground 13 weeks 5 days ago
I applaud the way that you: I applaud the way that you achieve---in a relatively small number of lines---a verbal atmostphere of foreboding and fear.  This is the essence of the finest horror stories, even of Rod Serling's "Twilight Zone" series (one of the highest compliments I can offer), and you have accomplished it here as if you had invented the concept.  I am so glad to have seen this poem posted, and to read it and compliment it; and, of course, I really like your screen name as well.  
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