voodoo puppet

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America is the weirdest country

paradise hands down

and home of the brave

master manipulator

technological stranger to my soul

influencing calibrations

with advanced turnikit on battlefield

and an unrolled Gucci velvet belt

holding the sleekest silver materials

sharp tools within

all the bells and whistles

to torture you

like voodoo puppet projects

prototype nobody knows

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

fuck it

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patriciajj's picture

Not sure if your new name

Not sure if your new name fits you. Your work is anything but ordinary: startlingly clever, sometimes enjoyably snarky and satirical and far far more than meets the eye.

 

I don't think I've read a more spot on, metaphorically blazing definition of this extravagant nightmare, this twisted nation "like voodoo puppet projects" or "sharp tools" swaddled in designer velvet. You're still a legit word wizard, my friend, and, as a nice little bonus, you voiced my own exasperation in the notes.

 

Delightful, acerbic, edgy brilliance.

 

patriciajj's picture

Looks like you changed your

Looks like you changed your name again. That's cool. Disregard the first sentence of my comment, but I meant what I expressed about your writing. Always enjoy reading you. 

humanfruit's picture

Oh but darling I already had

Oh but darling I already had quite a few still turning in the chamber of my brains, like a game of russian roulette, so that when you delivered your delightful compliment, one of such consistency that is the highest hurrah! in cherished quality also to that reaction I have upon receiving, out of respect for your starting statement, I rushed to change before returning to give great thanks, with a name I hope is befitting which we now both can appreciate, honorary, in reverence to your very own divine grace, always absinthe-proof as a best-friend blessing to this page


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