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patriciajj commented on: Sparkles and Glims by FLboy555 4 years 46 weeks ago
I read this twice because of: I read this twice because of its intricacy and power. From your summit of vast perspective and profound insight, you turned your (And our!) "stagnant lifestyle" into a magnificent, precious gift. Your "pristine heart" gives us a latern of beauty to marvel at, to live by.    Truly inspired art. 
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patriciajj commented on: свобода by lizardking 4 years 46 weeks ago
I was captivated by the first: I was captivated by the first stanza that has the majesty of a sweeping overture as you present astounding analogies illustrating the transience of human life. Quickly it swells into moving declarations of realities we often hide from, but need to remember in order to keep a broader perspective and an appreciation for the time we now have.   You say it with elegant candor as you shift our focus to a time-worn grave and thoughts beyond our tiny, fleeting lives.    But what I found most intriguing was your title. From Bulgarian (I hope I got that right) it translates as "freedom". How perfect!    I gained much from this poem. Thank you. 
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saiom commented on: HAPPY ENDINGS by AngryLaughter 4 years 46 weeks ago
response: wish i could sit with you while you explain this poem's meaning to you
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patriciajj commented on: Tree Service by saiom 4 years 46 weeks ago
Thank you! Every tree that: Thank you! Every tree that falls is a tragedy. We lose more beauty, climate stability, privacy, clean air, habitat for wildlife, physical and mental health, fertlile soil, noise control, light pollution control and hundreds of years of miraculous life. I wish more people were as dedicated to saving them as you are. Love the sense of irony here. Service! What a joke. 
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allets commented on: JACKIE O' by palewingedpoetess 4 years 46 weeks ago
Excellent Trbute: . Public figures seldom reflect the home front. The inner war. Melissa captured it in this wondrous tribute. ~Lady A~
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allets commented on: LIBERATION by palewingedpoetess 4 years 46 weeks ago
War Description: A commentary on how to feel (or not) about war. Well said and thought provoking. "pretense" brings us forward to living as war works better. I am a veteran of life. :D . Lady A .
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Coffeepot commented on: In the doorway by Coffeepot 4 years 46 weeks ago
I hadn't had church in mind: I hadn't had church in mind when I wrote it but your comment has helped me see it from a completely different angle. Thanks Lady A, great insight as ever! xP
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Coffeepot commented on: In the doorway by Coffeepot 4 years 46 weeks ago
Thanks Starward for the: Thanks Starward for the lovely comment. xP
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Coffeepot commented on: Overheard by Coffeepot 4 years 46 weeks ago
Thanks for great comment,: Thanks for great comment, Lady A. Hope you are keeping well this Christmas xP
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allets commented on: Vision This... by mrswagghop 4 years 46 weeks ago
"keep it moving we lease this flesh...": Well said - Remember us when ya make yr first mil. .
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allets commented on: PERSISTENCE OF MEMORY by georgeschaefer 4 years 46 weeks ago
Phalluses: Extra ones on the male shoulders like lollipops - so that sexism can be equitable. We could knit them little muffs for winter, but Dali would smile. I saw Persistence of Memory at the Chicago Inst. Of Art . I sttod mesmerized for half an hour. Steven's model painting, The blue guitar,  is also there. :D . Lady A .
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allets commented on: I Don't Care Anymore. by teresa_r 4 years 46 weeks ago
Isolation And Trust: . Periodically, we all withdraw from social tragedies, it is a risk. Women can be the hero of their life or victims, searching perpetually for a sitcom family and friends life or picking up the reigns and yelling, H'Yaaa!!! And you are off.  . Covid has not stopped me. I bother everyone with texts. I gave up fb (Meta) too intrusive. Family has gone virtual. I still send cards and write letter - inserting poems in them. I am re-reading my library. Time to hit the second hand bookstore to find your favorite authors!  We only thrive as social animals! It requires cultivation of a shiekding and healthy dose of not following. lead!. Lady A Be well. 
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Starward commented on: This Christmas Season by randyjohnson 4 years 46 weeks ago
I wondered if you might have: I wondered if you might have a Christmas insight for us, and here it is.  I think sometimes we forget that the elegac mood is as appropriate to Christmas as festive carolling.  In the calendar of liturgical churches, Christmas is followed by the commemoration of multiple murders---the lynching of Deacon Stephen (the 26th), and Herod's mass murder of the children in Bethlehem (the 28th).  Thank you for reminding us of our losses at a time when human nature, being damaged, is often tempted to forget or ignore them.
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patriciajj commented on: Plunging to Heaven by patriciajj 4 years 47 weeks ago
Your comment was one of those: Your comment was one of those brilliant gems "in the wordmine". I'm thrilled that you can relate because what truly matters is the reader: what did I give? Thank you for your validation and sharp insight. It means so much. 
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patriciajj commented on: Universe Within by patriciajj 4 years 47 weeks ago
I admire spunk so I take that: I admire spunk so I take that as a compliment. Thank you! 
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