Universe Within

Have you ever been

invited into a

perfect idea,

 

something like the

last rays when they

slide down 

stacks of sky,

 

when they are 

liquid wisdom

soaking every shadow 

in your

brittle moments,

and adoring your

one life, 

right now,

 

and every starry spray

is your own light

reflected back,

 

because you 

are that loved,

 

and so wanted?

 

And have you ever 

spiraled into 

that imperial space,

vast as imagination—

a ruby chamber

living an angel's life

inside the lordly rose

 

and found a lost portion 

of yourself,

then whole, 

you were everything 

you needed?

 

If you have,

even for a moment,

felt like the most 

important concept 

the universe ever had,

and were crushed in 

its pulsing light,

 

its unendurable wonder,

its elation 

for the essence of you,

 

for nothing you ever did,

or didn't do,

just because you are,

and will always be,

 

then you have,

dear pilgrim 

in this lonely dance,

 

entered into the arms

of God. 

 

Patricia Joan Jones

 

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SSmoothie's picture

Have I? Only every time I

Have I? Only every time I read you! EVERY TIME!  HUGSS 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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What awesome feedback! I

What awesome feedback! I cherish it. Huge hugss. Endless thanks, very fine Poet.

 
allets's picture

"the most/important

"the most/important concept/the universe ever had" ??? That kind of writing takes SPUNK!!!!!!

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Lady A

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patriciajj's picture

I admire spunk so I take that

I admire spunk so I take that as a compliment. Thank you! 

S74rw4rd's picture

In this poem, your

In this poem, your particularly powerful style of poetry proves itself to be astronomical, cosmological, and theological.  These, in a lesser style, would have been burdensome to the poem and the reader; but, in your adroit ability with words, they become delightful, invocative, and comforting to the reader.  Wow!  This poem could only have been written by you.  To borrow an old advertising slogan, the source of which I now forget, while you may have competitors, you will never have any competition for the greatness you have already achieved, and the greatness beyond that still awaiting you.


Starward

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Wow, I can't tell you what

Wow, I can't tell you what that means to me. My heartfelt gratitude. I've been enjoying your work as well. So many stunning creations appearing every day. 

S74rw4rd's picture

Thank you so much---primarily

Thank you so much---primarily for posting this wonderful poem and, then, for the kind compliments about my remark in your reply.


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