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Starward commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; The Cosmic Witness by Starward-Led 4 years 47 weeks ago
Thank you so very much for: Thank you so very much for those kind words.
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georgeschaefer commented on: NO PURPOSE by georgeschaefer 4 years 47 weeks ago
Well, we'll all have plenty: Well, we'll all have plenty to complain about on Festivus anyway
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Vamprose commented on: New love by Vamprose999 4 years 47 weeks ago
Thank you, so very much! It: Thank you, so very much! It brings such joy reading your words.
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allets commented on: Universe Within by patriciajj 4 years 47 weeks ago
"the most/important: "the most/important concept/the universe ever had" ??? That kind of writing takes SPUNK!!!!!! . Lady A .  
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allets commented on: Plunging to Heaven by patriciajj 4 years 47 weeks ago
"...it was familiar/and it: "...it was familiar/and it rhymed/well enough" - the story of my life! The line snagged me. I got netted and pulled in. I am always glad to discover a gem in the wordmine that tumbles into the palm, is thrown into the air, grasped, and pocketed. You never know what line will target and bullseye a reader.  :D . Lady A .
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patriciajj commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; The Cosmic Witness by Starward-Led 4 years 47 weeks ago
I have a new favorite! The: I have a new favorite! The way you connected our present lives to monumental, spiritual events, making the heavenly bodies a "cosmic witness . . . like a spiritual rhyme" was a breathtaking sweep of inspiration and beauty. Magnificent! 
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patriciajj commented on: Above And Beyond Heaven by saiom 4 years 47 weeks ago
An expansive view of ultimate: An expansive view of ultimate reality beyond this dense realm and even what we call heaven. I like your implication that the destination is not necessarily a place but a focus, a state, that we are. Uplifting and liberating. 
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patriciajj commented on: New love by Vamprose999 4 years 47 weeks ago
I'm imagining a superb: I'm imagining a superb finished creation, but even if you ended it here, there is a sense of blissful completion in this compact adventure from first sight to deep connection. Wonderful. 
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patriciajj commented on: Cloud Script by saiom 4 years 47 weeks ago
I'm seeing it! Ingenious: I'm seeing it! Ingenious imagery with a feeling of deep tranquility. 
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tula commented on: shoji by tula 4 years 47 weeks ago
Thanks, allets.  Let me: Thanks, allets.  Let me ruminate for some time.. because I often forget about some.of these grammar rules, especially if I talk in street sociolects often, or even if I do not use it as often as it should be correctly used.. due to possible intercultural incompetence on my part.
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saiom commented on: The Many Ways The Military Abuses Dogs by saiom2 4 years 47 weeks ago
Shot, Bombed, Killed, Abandoned: Dogs in the military are killed, shot, bombed,abandoned... and after abandonment can be killedby the local populace.https://theweek.com/articles/479708/disturbing-effects-war-military-dogs
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Starward commented on: Seasons on a Pond by abg123 4 years 47 weeks ago
You have quite a skilled way: You have quite a skilled way of evoking the beauty and the meaning of the beauty of nature.
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Starward commented on: Let me see you again by abg123 4 years 47 weeks ago
This poem is a powerful: This poem is a powerful presentation of a deep and poignant emotion.
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Starward commented on: An American Autumn by abg123 4 years 47 weeks ago
I am partial to Autumn poems;: I am partial to Autumn poems; that is, I mean to say, to good Autumn poems.  And this one is an EXCELLENT autumn poem.  Highly evocative of both the beauty and the thrill of Autumn, not one of its words is out of place, or wasted, or superfluous.  
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Starward commented on: Coworker by abg123 4 years 47 weeks ago
What an excellent tribute.: What an excellent tribute.
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