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crypticbard commented on: elegy for Jonathan, the prince by redbrick 4 years 23 weeks ago
Thank you, kindly.: Thank you, kindly.
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crypticbard commented on: + 1ST POEMS: The Firm Answer Given To Some Discouraging Moment by Starward-Led 4 years 23 weeks ago
poetically! yes!: poetically! yes!
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Starward commented on: + 1ST POEMS: The Firm Answer Given To Some Discouraging Moment by Starward-Led 4 years 23 weeks ago
I am soooo sorry I failed to: I am soooo sorry I failed to acknowledge this comment.
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crypticbard commented on: Song of Stone by patriciajj 4 years 23 weeks ago
For some reason this reminds: For some reason this reminds me of the Grand Canyon and other such places. It is a blessing to those who perceive it and for those who only see stone, places such as these are quite deadly for the unmindful travellers. Pardon if I went off topic. Thanks for sharing.
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patriciajj commented on: Sacred Crone by patriciajj 4 years 23 weeks ago
Thank you so much for your: Thank you so much for your brilliant expression and your understanding of my vision. Coming from such a gifted and insightful poet, it means so much. 
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patriciajj commented on: Sacred Crone by patriciajj 4 years 23 weeks ago
I accidentally posted my: I accidentally posted my response to your wonderful feedback above instead of using "reply". Didn't want you to think this went unappreciated. 
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crypticbard commented on: Day by osiriss- 4 years 23 weeks ago
"Life destroyed by: "Life destroyed by technology" that is a very sobering thought because of its addictive reality.
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crypticbard commented on: Post-coma by owlcrkbrg 4 years 23 weeks ago
Hope it isn't rude to answer: Hope it isn't rude to answer based on the first two suppositions. Gripping read. Thanks for sharing.
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crypticbard commented on: SOONISH by mil57man 4 years 23 weeks ago
Very hopeful and purposeful.: Very hopeful and purposeful. There is a surety of knowing even when it hasn't itself been presented yet. Thanks for sharing.
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allets commented on: Slipping Gears in Reality by Beavis 4 years 23 weeks ago
Go Beav: "...feeling /something /beyond"  Great line. Good 2 read U . :D ~A~
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allets commented on: To Be Near You by rachel 4 years 23 weeks ago
Cool: Truth in writing.Wit rocks. (No?) ~A~
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crypticbard commented on: Slipping Gears in Reality by Beavis 4 years 23 weeks ago
realistically surreal.: realistically surreal. Everything seems to be filtered and made sense of in our thoughts, what we know, what we don't, and the things that we are on the fence about. I like the title as it suggests; remember driving an old van once and its gears slipped between 2nd and 3rd, it was a sweaty task to get it to navigate the busy streets doing deliveries. Nowadays, automatics are the choice transmission.
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crypticbard commented on: And The Court Says by allets 4 years 23 weeks ago
story of my life. How strange: story of my life. How strange that what we grew up knowing is no longer or changing. Such instability is not good for people and nation. 
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crypticbard commented on: In Tall Grass by Psysped 4 years 23 weeks ago
As mom always says, 'empty: As mom always says, 'empty the bladder before leaving the house.' This was a fun read. Thanks for sharing.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Way Of Life by allets 4 years 23 weeks ago
"..the while the world: "..the while the world exphyxiates. Conflagrates."   What great lines, in terms of feel (with that powerful momentary pause adding emphasis), language, and the expressing of a confounding destruction. A burn despite a lack of oxygen.   All sealed with the world issuing it's "ultimate complaint". Another fine threading of yours, right on through the needle.    
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