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ramonathompsont commented on: GENERAL WRITING MADNESS by georgeschaefer 3 years 17 weeks ago
good one. love late night: good one. love late night writing. thats when some of the best ideas come and flow
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Starward commented on: passer-bye by Spinoza 3 years 17 weeks ago
These few short lines contain: These few short lines contain an immensely profound wisdom.
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crypticbard commented on: Down in the Depths Hidden From Sight by Misterioso 3 years 17 weeks ago
That's a whole lifetime there: That's a whole lifetime there spent of sleeping and eating, hair cutting and hair lengthening, of gaining and losing of weight. And all the while Time ticks and the hours become days and months and years, and the tocking continues. It felt like love was hidden both in the shutting in and of being shut out. So real and so impressing.
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SSmoothie commented on: Words Like Smoke and Sand by patriciajj 3 years 17 weeks ago
Wow!!!: Wow!!!
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patriciajj commented on: A litany of manic adventures by SSmoothie 3 years 17 weeks ago
I'm so moved by your: I'm so moved by your exquisite words of appreciation and encouragement that I simply don't know how to thank you. Love, joy, life and hugss to you as well. 
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Starward commented on: Entitled To Evil by EventHorizon 3 years 17 weeks ago
God watches now because He: God watches now because He will not take away the gift of Free Will that He bestowed upon us.  But watching does not imply passive response.  He will respond in His timing, not ours; and that response will be, for some, rather rough.
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Starward commented on: Broken Souls by EventHorizon 3 years 17 weeks ago
No one can doubt the power of: No one can doubt the power of your imagery.  I have, in decades past, read many horror tales in prose---many of them far too verbose---that do not handle this same theme near as successfully as you have in those poems of yours that I have read tonight,
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Starward commented on: Abysmal by EventHorizon 3 years 17 weeks ago
The poignancy of the last: The poignancy of the last four lines is gut-wrenching.
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Starward commented on: Broken by EventHorizon 3 years 17 weeks ago
This is the second poem of: This is the second poem of yours that I have ready today---just as eerie and as enjoyable as the first.
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Starward commented on: Brain by EventHorizon 3 years 17 weeks ago
This is a very eerie poem,: This is a very eerie poem, but I enjoyed it very much.
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boarster commented on: Another Cry In Despair by boarster 3 years 17 weeks ago
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Starward commented on: And I miss you by SSmoothie 3 years 17 weeks ago
The two Poets who have: The two Poets who have commented on this prior to me have completely expressed what I would have said anyhow, and they have expressed it better than I could.
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Starward commented on: The Show Goes On by rachel 3 years 17 weeks ago
I agree, with just one: I agree, with just one reservation, that this poem should not be further edited, because it reads so well as it is.  The one alteration I would suggest is to change "round 2" to "round two."  And those last ten or so lines are very, very powerful.
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Starward commented on: Wombaloo by rachel 3 years 17 weeks ago
This is better than Lewis: This is better than Lewis Carroll's Jabberwocky.
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Starward commented on: Pillow Thoughts by rachel 3 years 17 weeks ago
This poem has a very playful: This poem has a very playful tone to it, like the scherzo in a symphony.  This is how I imagine your actual conversational voice to be.
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