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Pungus commented on: A litany of manic adventures by SSmoothie 3 years 18 weeks ago
No lie: I am always SUPER stoked when you post
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Pungus commented on: Maintain a focused frequency by Pungus 3 years 18 weeks ago
Bouquet of thanks: I guess it depends on the overall Tolerance levels of those involved
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Starward commented on: A litany of manic adventures by SSmoothie 3 years 18 weeks ago
This is an excellent poem,: This is an excellent poem, and you deploy the metaphor of music quite well.  The center of the poem is in the lines "And plucking joy from the air / A glorious spiritual liturgy / How beautiful now since we've learned to pray . . ."  And the last four lines shows the effect of the process described in the poem's center.  The hopefulness conveyed in this poem is like a cup of cool water in the scorching heat of the desert of our squabbles and despairs in this difficult time.
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SSmoothie commented on: Maintain a focused frequency by Pungus 3 years 18 weeks ago
I like it alot! BUT HIGHLY: I like it alot! BUT HIGHLY UNLIKELY FOR A PARDON ME THINKS.
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SSmoothie commented on: Centralia by life_used_to_be... 3 years 18 weeks ago
Beautiful elegantly rendered: Beautiful elegantly rendered but humble and rather charming. Hugss 
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SSmoothie commented on: WORSE THAN COCK BLOCK by georgeschaefer 3 years 18 weeks ago
How true. .. there's nothing: How true. .. there's nothing worse! Well described i had fun while it lasted and went home empty handed 
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crypticbard commented on: Hypersensitive by Pungus 3 years 18 weeks ago
Oh cool, yeah. Got that.: Oh cool, yeah. Got that.
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Pungus commented on: Hypersensitive by Pungus 3 years 18 weeks ago
Withdrawals I wish: Nah, what I'm saying is I'm in the habit of only eating one meal every 30-40 hours but puff on cigs like a draconic druglord
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crypticbard commented on: murder at the kaisarion by redbrick 3 years 18 weeks ago
There is comfort that it is: There is comfort that it is deemed so by an esteemed reader. Thoughts are less that half a penny cheap, even to the most intimate of relations. Thank you for indicating so.
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crypticbard commented on: Plastic dolls are sexy by Pungus 3 years 18 weeks ago
Oh wow, intense scenario.: Oh wow, intense scenario. Curious too because of language the old British classic films mix in with the samurai celluloid masterpieces. That is totally the reader's conceiving.
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crypticbard commented on: Hypersensitive by Pungus 3 years 18 weeks ago
withdrawals?: withdrawals?
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crypticbard commented on: By enemies enslaved by Pungus 3 years 18 weeks ago
It's curious how deep down we: It's curious how deep down we all know this feeling and episode and how invariably different for each one this journey may be. "barfed up bite" That image stands out and reminds me of the allusion of the proverbial dog returning to its vomit.
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crypticbard commented on: coaster poetry by redbrick 3 years 18 weeks ago
Ah, the sweet aroma of life: Ah, the sweet aroma of life lived in a harmony of one's intimate circle.
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Pungus commented on: coaster poetry by redbrick 3 years 18 weeks ago
Good work: This one hit home
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patriciajj commented on: In the Fallow Field by patriciajj 3 years 18 weeks ago
I'm always left humbled and: I'm always left humbled and breathless by your comments that hit the mark with stunning precision and beauty. Thank you so much for reading and understanding the nuances of this poem that was an anniversary gift a lifetime (or so it seems) ago.   My deepest gratitude, fine Poet. 
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