Heaven is a Moment

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Love

One day my mind eloped
with spun-sugar clouds
and I followed them to heaven
only to discover heaven was here:

 

it was always you.

 

Dreams are landscapes we
roll out like fabric
when the earth grows soft and pale,
the skeletons of glittering
angels that could be.

 

Seldom does reality
materialize from that sweet
incense too holy for our lives
but it did
the day you ended my search for you.

 

Romance is too often a body
without a soul,
but we are one soul
living two lives,
improving each other
chiding time.

 

I want to be alone with you
where snoring frogs and
fertile thoughts and
your breath are the only sounds.

 

We will become the music
the earth will dance to.

 

I want the chance to unravel
your cares
and paint the universe black
as the breathless years
between the stars,

 

for you to see nothing
but the fire I borrowed
from a youthful dream,
to hear nothing but my
newborn heart spelling
out the words:
I love you.

 

Patricia Joan Jones

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This received The International Award for Excellence and Beauty at The Golden Quill poetry forum.

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arqios's picture

A tale of discovering and

A tale of discovering and growing into transcendent romance, the kind that is rarely recognised or nurtured and yet nags at so many. There was a lot of talk and lore about soul mates and true love and flames only to end up in crash and burn but where is the heart of what is real between these star crossed lovers and their could have beens! And for an elect few the youthful dream continues with each setting and rising of the sun, because they together "know."


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patriciajj's picture

Thank you for stopping by and

Thank you for stopping by and leaving such a ravishing and expansive contemplation on my theme. Always an honor when you stop by.

Marie Fair's picture

Wonderful poem. Anyone that can make me smile on a Tuesday deserves highest praise! Great!