Tanka from a moldy scroll

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Come, let's plunge to the

Gutters, my love, deeming them

Our home so cozy,

Oh, the fanciest mansion!

Rats as pets... intelligent!


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I want to applaud twice: 

I want to applaud twice:  first, for your respect for the traditional Tanka lineation and syllabification; and, then, for the gothis/science fiction effect that this poem presents.


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That moldy scroll got a

That moldy scroll got a vibrant attitude! Sweet read there. Smile


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