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This is an epic poem, an: This is an epic poem, an accumulation of verbally skilled phrases---some delightfully beautiful, some achingly beautiful, but all beautiful, and all giving full evidence of your superlative artistry as a Poet.  I cannot imagine how much time, or how much preparation, went into the composition of this great achievement; but I can see the great effects on the very screen in front of me.  The poem's purpose is disclosed in the final three lines, and these lines draw all the others together in a perfected orbit.  I was once told or read---so long ago I cannot now cite the source---that the purpose of Poetry is to show how efficiently, effectively and intensely the language can work, and be worked:  and this poem demonstrates that to the Nth degree.

It's now on YouTube: You can now watch/hear me read this one at:  https://youtube.com/shorts/6bV2bZWdhH4

Thank you for the kind words: Thank you for the kind words :)

sweet poem. too bad romance: sweet poem. too bad romance does not really exist like this.

Beautiful! I love the: Beautiful! I love the analogiesand ideas. The wide eyed innocence and hope! 

Oh the joy of that hot live: Oh the joy of that hotline, live to Heaven! Prayer is like that red phone in Batman and of course the bat signal. But again, it isn't just the fixed place and time which New Testament faith exemplifies: in their homes, at the temple, in the synagogues, as they went, in each other's company: a truly ever reaching, ever stretching fellowship.

Indeed! Romans could be seen: Indeed! Romans could be seen as Paul's gospel account and Galatians considered a 'little Romans.' The prison epistles could be thought of as the rubber hitting the road, among other more delectable theological descriptives. Almost two-fold in that grouping: theoretical and applied expressions of faith.