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Teytonon commented on: Who are you by ravenlove 2 years 30 weeks ago
Hello. If you don’t mind..: Hello. If you don't mind, I can not only tell you who you are, but what you love. How? Your name! LINDSEY DIWD 'RAVENLOVE' = I LOVE DYIN' WRDS! 'AVE? LEND!        
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Mylo commented on: Diazepam by grahf 2 years 30 weeks ago
Interesting poem.: Nicely stared emotional piece.
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patriciajj commented on: Soft and Final Landing by patriciajj 2 years 31 weeks ago
I love your poetry and I'm: I love your poetry and I'm honored that you took the time to read and leave such encouraging feedback on my work. I value your opinion. Thank you so much! 
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Teytonon commented on: What Was And Is by crimsonangel24 2 years 31 weeks ago
This is a very powerful..: This is a very powerful, well written piece which clearly expresses both your anger, frustration, and eventual acceptance of what must have been a very painful episode of your life. Well done. You mention you have another 12 years to go on probation. As this was written in 2013, that would mean your probation would end next year. You won't be a slave to the penal system anymore. If you're not a slave, would that make you a master? I, for one, believe I am.  A master who believes in probation. Yes, I'm definitely pro 'master'-bation.  
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Mylo commented on: Soft and Final Landing by patriciajj 2 years 31 weeks ago
" . . . Like me they are fugitives of sameness . . .": Being surrounded by numerous poets here who are far more trained in poetry than I, all I can say is that I was moved by this poem especially the line cited above.
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patriciajj commented on: Soft and Final Landing by patriciajj 2 years 31 weeks ago
Can't thank you enough for: Can't thank you enough for that! 
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S74rw4rd commented on: Soft and Final Landing by patriciajj 2 years 31 weeks ago
I consider it a privilege to: I consider it a privilege to remind you, as often as needed, of your present greatness, and the magnificent niche your poems will occupy in the future.  I may, at times, be repetitious about this.  
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patriciajj commented on: Soft and Final Landing by patriciajj 2 years 31 weeks ago
Thank you for throwing me: Thank you for throwing me that lifeline! And a lifeline filled with radiance, expansive thought and Starward-quality eloquence no less. Really needed to be brought back to reality.   
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patriciajj commented on: Soft and Final Landing by patriciajj 2 years 31 weeks ago
I adore your life-altering: I adore your life-altering insights into contrast, life as a playful drama, not a senseless struggle and, as you eloquently put it: the veil as a gift. Only an enlightened being who has cracked the code of this wild and puzzling Earth school could have that perspective. Thank you for sharing your wisdom, innate talent and encouragement. You were certainly a bright spot in my day.  
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patriciajj commented on: Moonset at Winter's End by patriciajj 2 years 31 weeks ago
I am so deeply moved and: I am so deeply moved and honored by the insightful artistry, the kind encouragement, of your comment. I certainly understand time restraints, and the fact that you took the time to read, appreciate and comment on my work means so much. A resounding "Thank you!"    
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SSmoothie commented on: He would’ve preferred a woman by Teytonon 2 years 31 weeks ago
Sadder still, he was the best: Sadder still, he was the best one then and all signs say will again.. 
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SSmoothie commented on: Filled with awe by Teytonon 2 years 31 weeks ago
Glad you enjoyed it. I: Glad you enjoyed it. I watched it online. It was amazing, apparently earthquakes are due in 3 months... 
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SSmoothie commented on: A Blustery Day in the Bedroom by Spinoza 2 years 31 weeks ago
How good! I totally ignored: How good! I totally ignored my phone ringing to read this and well I love the ending as much as the faux par. Nicely written held the intimacy and realism well, I felt myself think I've been there before, not the same issue but the same rhythmic dance of words snaking through to get to the truth only to find its actually an eel. Just Good work. Great even! Hugss 
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SSmoothie commented on: The Moment by Wordman 2 years 31 weeks ago
Just gorgeous! Expertly: Just gorgeous! Expertly done  I have so many day_night lovers poems i can day hand on my heart this is simply gorgeous and affecting from start to finish.  Wonderfully wrought an ageless theme in a flawless frame. Hugss 
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SSmoothie commented on: Soft and Final Landing by patriciajj 2 years 31 weeks ago
Yes what if all is well? It: Yes what if all is well? It is always well, What a boring way  If heaven is nothing but peace all day No touch  Taste,  Smell, Only foresight  No free will,  How boring if all was well  How great that such a journey begins  Where the dark is the backdrop of light  Constrasting and playing  With blind luck  Seeing strengths we never knew we had  Things we never dreamed  Because we always knew What a gift a is the veil  What a thrill is exposition  Something different to what you knew  The joy of surprise  A truly valuable thing  In the eye of the beholder  Who could not with out life Have beholden.    Such an amazing concept and look at trials and renewal tge art of tempering...    How well you write,  Alwaye a pleasure in every case.   Hugss 
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