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patriciajj commented on: a small night music disarray by redbrick 1 year 26 weeks* ago* What Starward said, plus my: What Starward said, plus my greatest respect for your stylistic prowess. The way you snatched the human experience and enshrined it in a minimum of timeless, impeccable words and with uncommon, poetic sleight of hand . . . miraculous. Stunning. Cue the applause. [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Unforgettable by lyrycsyntyme 1 year 26 weeks* ago* The impact of your mournful: The impact of your mournful and phenomenally beautiful expression lingers after the last line is read. Such graceful dexterity of language and meditative, heart-clutching expression. I completely resonated with every enthralling line. Loving it! [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: A Cup of Hemlock by satishverma 1 year 26 weeks* ago* Your laconic poems bear a: Your laconic poems bear a sense of mystery that makes for a most compelling reading experience. [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: THIS GRAND ILLUSION by pamschwetz 1 year 26 weeks* ago* I love Styx! And your title: I love Styx! And your title made me think of their song, too. Grand illusions rely on complexity. They are unraveled by simplicity. Love others, whether or not they appear to deserve it. Judge as little as possible. Touch the world gently, be the last to pull a sword. Be willing to take leaps of faiths for others, be faithful. Be honest, stand by your principles, and see out unity between all. The illusions starts to fade. [ go to comment ]
Beavis commented on: Fractal Lives by Beavis 1 year 26 weeks* ago* Deeply honored: What every poem strives for. I so happy that you connected with my poem! I thought was a good poem, but had no idea it would be so impactful to others. Thank you again for your kindness. [ go to comment ]
Beavis commented on: Fractal Lives by Beavis 1 year 26 weeks* ago* ;-): Many thanks lyrycsyntyme! [ go to comment ]
Beavis commented on: Fractal Lives by Beavis 1 year 26 weeks* ago* Wow!: I hope your health is improvin, and I added you to my prayer list. As for the saying, I'm sure I picked up in college or a boook. I don't think it's original, BUT, you made my day by sharing the effect it had. Praying for You & always write, even if. I one ever sees it. [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: Fractal Lives by Beavis 1 year 26 weeks* ago* A Rushmore of everyone : ): A Rushmore of everyone : ) [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: a small night music disarray by redbrick 1 year 26 weeks* ago* My thanks to you Starward;: My thanks to you Starward; that image of sweater in contrast with a seasonal allusion was hoped to portray how love can sometimes be. And yes, that title was inspired by Mozart's Eine Kleine Nachtmusik, which I was hopeful would be another contrast for texture in its reading. [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: a small night music disarray by redbrick 1 year 26 weeks* ago* In the final stanza, the: In the final stanza, the first two lines are among the most poignant I have ever read, in half a century of reading Poetry. Your lines are every bit as excellent as anything Wallace Stevens ever wrote in a similar mood. Your title also made me think of Mozart's Eine Kleine Nacthmusik. [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: Mandalorian by deepblue 1 year 26 weeks* ago* I like the cryptic tone of: I like the cryptic tone of this poem. And is that last line an allusion to Wallace Stevens' poem, "The Man On The Dump" ? [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: Bet it all on DeSantis by Teytonon 1 year 26 weeks* ago* We've lost that sense of humor that helps guide us through : ..the struggle. And that innocence? I believe it's been left outside the pulsing wires of our most modern existance. Only that, inside it's us that are the neglected dogs being rained on. [ go to comment ]
Teytonon commented on: Bet it all on DeSantis by Teytonon 1 year 26 weeks* ago* I agree totally. It reminds..: I agree totally. It reminds me of a prayer my friend used to say at night when he was a kid.. Now I lay me down to sleep These hunger pangs are running deep If you see me, please don't wake Unless you're giving me burgers and a shake Where has the innocence of childhood gone? [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: Bet it all on DeSantis by Teytonon 1 year 26 weeks* ago* Everyone is asleep: Some are just dreaming that they're awake : ) [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: Donald Who? by Teytonon 1 year 26 weeks* ago* I applaud your attitude.: I applaud your attitude. [ go to comment ]