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SSmoothie commented on: Where the Wind Lives by patriciajj 48 weeks 3 days* ago* Stunning! An arrow of: Stunning! An arrow of splendour hitting the heart of its target with its own description! I agree whole heartedly! [ go to comment ]
SSmoothie commented on: Council of Stars by patriciajj 48 weeks 3 days* ago* Everything i need... right: Everything i need... right here in this poem... just soul reaching gorgeous! [ go to comment ]
SSmoothie commented on: Dancing in Your Song by patriciajj 48 weeks 3 days* ago* Just incredible! A perfectly: Just incredible! A perfectly executed dedication! Hugss [ go to comment ]
SSmoothie commented on: Startrail to the Absolute by patriciajj 48 weeks 3 days* ago* Wow a beautiful and stellar: Wow a beautiful and stellar tribute to beauty and the immortal nature of creation, creating and creativity... the nods were not missed, each one categorised in each readers mind in the appropriate resonance. Do we feel it too? Apparently we do. And the beautiful and gracious way you let us know is precious, priceless even. Thankyou hugss Ss [ go to comment ]
SSmoothie commented on: smiling by humanfruit 48 weeks 3 days* ago* This hit home for me. It: This hit home for me. It brought me back in time to the first time I felt real love I was was getting ready for a date and brushing my hair in the mirror I heard the sound of thier very familiar sound of thier vehicle and looked at my face to see a smile stretching across the glass and I knew I was in love... [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Winter by rachel 48 weeks 3 days* ago* When love turns to PTSD. I: When love turns to PTSD. I get it. Your running metaphor was a grenade to the heart and it exploded into devastatingly brilliant lines. At the end, there was a hush, an eloquent silence, that hovered as I took in the impact of that last word "alone". A stoke of genius to isolate that last line and imbue it with so much weariness, finality and significance. Amazing image work. Remarkable. [ go to comment ]
rachel commented on: Winter by rachel 48 weeks 4 days* ago* Sometimes love really feels: Sometimes love really feels like war and I'm just glad it's over [ go to comment ]
S74rw4rd commented on: Untitled 31 by rachel 48 weeks 4 days* ago* That last quatrain describes: That last quatrain describes a large part of my earlier years. [ go to comment ]
S74rw4rd commented on: Winter by rachel 48 weeks 4 days* ago* This poem was difficult to: This poem was difficult to read---not because of any flaw, but because of the verbal skill with which you deploy your words. Your extended metaphor of warfare (for some reason, I kept thinking of images from WWI) is handled with exquisite skill, and thus, due to that skill, the poem is not at all easy to read. That kind of difficulty is not a flaw; it is often a sign of a high degree of poetic art. [ go to comment ]
SSmoothie commented on: Whoah there Tiger! by SSmoothie 48 weeks 4 days* ago* Thanks Starward! Coming from: Thanks Starward! Coming from you this is very high praise and I do not think my huffing and puffing could ever match your keen intellectual and your incredible analysis of any and all things [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: Fly by arqios 48 weeks 4 days* ago* My gratitude for these: My gratitude for these uplifting words in response soars quite freely as well. [ go to comment ]
S74rw4rd commented on: MY FAITH IS RENEWED by beaconzbard 48 weeks 4 days* ago* This is another excellent: This is another excellent testimony yo the Faith; and I applaud your work in this series. Admittedly, I found the seventh line to be difficult; using the contraction "You'd" in order to achieve a rhyme compliance with the sixth line seems like a stumbling block. Other than that, this is a very excellent poem. [ go to comment ]
S74rw4rd commented on: Fly by arqios 48 weeks 4 days* ago* I really like the way in: I really like the way in which you apply the metaphor of flight to Poetry. This poem spoke to me in a way that only a very few do. [ go to comment ]
S74rw4rd commented on: BY GRACE I MAY ENTER by beaconzbard 48 weeks 5 days* ago* Another excellent testimony: Another excellent testimony to the Faith . . . . the emphasis on Grace is tremendously important. [ go to comment ]
S74rw4rd commented on: absinthian reveries by arqios 48 weeks 5 days* ago* A perfectly constructed: A perfectly constructed Senryu, with all the virtues of that form. Be proud of this one!!! [ go to comment ]