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Chaos is all around us

I have come to this body

with fierce beating heart

I fear

abandonment only

now that you are here

to hope to hold

smiling in the mirror


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This hit home for me. It

This hit home for me. It brought me back in time to the first time I felt real love I was was getting ready for a date and brushing my hair in the mirror I heard the sound of thier very familiar sound of thier vehicle and looked at my face to see a smile stretching across the glass and I knew I was in love...


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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The poem is very evocative,

The poem is very evocative, and states what I believe to be a universal fear:  the fear of abandonment.


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