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I hope you don’t mind..: I hope you don't mind Don't wish to be rude Have a comment on your poem Which I hope you'll include   Your point is not lost How it comes across What you tried to impart It touches my heart   This poem takes me back When I was a child A poor family, though money we'd lack My mom and dad tried to see that I smiled   When I was a boy, it still brought me joy When for my birthday, instead of a toy A card saying 'You know our love for you is deeply-rooted  Here are some batteries, toy not included'  

This is a magnificent: This is a magnificent testimony to the Faith.

Thank you for the reply.  It: Thank you for the reply.  It does not now haunt me; it ran out of steam in the mid-nineties.  But the poem definitely reminded me of its effects.  

haha: Its quite like that isnt it? Misery loves company and poetry

Good job! I thoroughly enjoyed..: Good job! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I have a question. I've noticed in other poems of yours such as 'I Kicked Bill Clinton's Ass' and 'I Slept With Daffy Duck', you would say in the Authors Comments section 'This is a fictional poem'. I'm sure I speak for many of your followers to let you know how much that is appreciated. However, I don't see that comment here. Just to be clear, does that mean this actually happened?  

I have a question..: I have a question  I'll make it quick What's a dichotomy? The surgical removal of a dic? I realize that my manner's crude I always try to rise above it But, for one man in your poem, that dude For him, I think you'd really love it!    

Without fail you tunnel deep,: Without fail you tunnel deep, extract my vision and interpret, not only my message, but my intentions. And with such thunder and beauty!   I also love the way you connect your own experiences to my poems (and others' work as well), turning a poem into meaningful self-discovery or validation. To have a fellow poet walk with us so closely on our creative path is unbelievably gratifying. Anyone honored enough to receive your astute and personalized commentary knows what I mean.   But if that wasn't enough, you lit a fire of much-needed motivation under me by reminding me of our (not just my) mission to "explain the Cosmos to itself".   When you put it that way, how can I neglect my work?   May Heaven join me in my endless gratitude, stay with you on your poetic journey and bless you (Outrageously!) every step of the way.