While our eyes are on: While our eyes are on Ukraine, Somalia's humanitarian crisis and its tidal wave of refugees should not be forgotten. The last three lines of your poem show a great amount of awareness and compassion. Well said!
I love your idea to save: I love your idea to save precious trees that provide shade, oxygen, cleaner air, climate contol, privacy, noise barriers, erosion prevention, wildlife habitat, psychological health (Studies show patients in hospital rooms that have a view of trees recovered faster) and, of course, natural beauty.
Reclaimed wood is a smart solution.
You have a gift for pinning: You have a gift for pinning down aspects of the human adventure with metaphors that erupt and stun. Feeling this! Amazing.
Delete - Revise Suggested: "Of all'" kills the cliche.
clean up line lengths kast verse.' "Still she needs to scream." - more emotionally charged.
"you can't protect men and women..."
Delete "I think" most if oiem is objective - "I can" subjective (voice and POV change).
last line - ? delete
count the suffering and servitude,
the size of the stones. Most disturbing,
each of them is a brick in the wall
of generations." - tighter.
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I never stop edting. Made changes this am to poems written in 2010.
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The stranglehold of the elite: Prince Andrew – the 62 year old son of the Queen, is a prime example.
He’s a natural-born cunt, that constantly twittles around with little kids and uses them as sex toys.
But he never sees a moment of jail time. He just pays twelve-million pound (16 million US Dollars) settlements out of court, and all is forgiven.
But he doesn’t even pay it out of his own pocket.
It’s paid by the UK tax payers.
Because the UK law is setup in such a way, that it pays all legal settlements for royalty.
And this goes on across the entirety of Europe…
https://isgp-studies.com/belgian-x-dossiers-of-the-marc-dutroux-affair-the-accused
You speak frustrations against the Wall of Generations: If we can ever change the world, it likely will take a collapse and starting over. Otherwise, any hope may take hundreds, if not thousands of years of incremental gains - first, somehow, stopping "the downfall" you speak of.
There's a theory of socio-genetics - social behaviors that are passed down through children/families/communities - in which civilizations have weeded out the most revolutionary, selfless people over the countless centuries, while the most selfish, controlling persons tended to hoard materials and survive (quite often as the rulers who eliminated the selfless revolutionaries). We can think of some great examples of the former - the altruists, if you will - in modern times. Martin Luther King Jr. didn't make it past 40. Medgar Evers was assassinated at 37. Perhaps Malcom X wasn't an altruist, but he still grew into a fairly selfless revolutionary and he was dead at 39.
Meanwhile, George Herbert Walker Bush, who was assistant director of the CIA during much of those years, then went on to head the CIA before becoming US President, lived to 94. At the head end of the table in the ruling class, Warren Buffet is 91 and so is George Soros. Overseas, meanwhile, the Queen of England - a fantastic example of a wealthy leech - is nearly a 100.
I could go on and on, but the point is, we only get the family rearing and cultural influence of people like King for half as long, or less, as we get from scumbags like Bush, Buffet, Soros and Queens/Kings. Compounded over 1000's of years, it's theoretically deteriorated our societies, with more and more of the remaining population being, essentially, bred to be selfish.
Cheers: Fahrenheit 451 – how did I miss this one?
I just did a bit of preliminary research, and it’s going straight to my reading list.
Cheers for that.
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Farenheit 451 : ..also hit on this quite well.
Society, itself, ultimately willingly participates in it's own censorship and erasure of the past. We are seeing this, as well.
Spot On Mate: Spot on mate…
“Oceania was at war with Eastasia: Oceania had always been at war with Eastasia. A large part of the political literature of five years was now completely obsolete. Reports and records of all kinds, newspapers, books, pamphlets, films, sound-tracks, photographs--all had to be rectified at lightning speed. Although no directive was ever issued, it was known that the chiefs of the Department intended that within one week no reference to the war with Eurasia, or the alliance with Eastasia, should remain in existence anywhere.”
Same sort of shit we hear, pumped down our throats in the media today.
Fear Porn, Fear Porn, Fear Porn.
Trade you liberties – for security… more fear porn, fear porn, fear porn.
Till finally, they’ve got you trapped in a cage with no escape.
A true return to feudalism – where you have no power, and no possessions.
You will own nothing and be happy – world economic forum – the great reset
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_U7gaYUgcGE