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Starward commented on: Reply To Lyrycsyntyme by J-C4113D 2 years 25 weeks ago
Aging midleaders.: Aging misleaders.
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Starward commented on: Reply To Lyrycsyntyme by J-C4113D 2 years 25 weeks ago
Names Washed Away Long Ago: Names Washed Away Long Ago might be a title to be considered.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Reply To Lyrycsyntyme by J-C4113D 2 years 25 weeks ago
Also, I thought to change the: Also, I thought to change the line "falsely known as politicians" to "falsely known as leaders", and then to "aging misleaders". Which would you say is most fitting?
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Reply To Lyrycsyntyme by J-C4113D 2 years 25 weeks ago
Not as of yet. But, once I: Not as of yet. But, once I can nail down a proper title, perhaps I will post it there, considering your response!
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Starward commented on: Reply To Lyrycsyntyme by J-C4113D 2 years 25 weeks ago
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! : Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Is that posted with your other poems?
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Reply To Lyrycsyntyme by J-C4113D 2 years 25 weeks ago
Appreciated, thank you.: To that regard, and with such encouragement, I gave it a shot, with a nod to your original thoughts.   (Currently Untitled)   The acid rainof their pollutedexistance erodestheir chiseled expressions   Living, breathingkilling tombstonesfalsely known as leaders,that just won't diethemselves   Though their nameand any honor in itwashed away a long time ago   They desperately tryto chisel at the stone that's leftBut it seems to methat murder and greedoften wears the face of death   Nadezhka's only ready for public in her dreamsThose who live in castles built of blood bricks cannot avoid the drops infiltrating their make up kits   Built them not mansions, neither surround with jail bars Give only houses of mirrors wall-to-wall, ceiling-to-floor leaving Cole's tapestry of self-destruction flooding all the halls   of their existence ever more  
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Starward commented on: Concession: In The Spirit Of Lent by J-C4113D 2 years 25 weeks ago
Thank you very much.: Thank you very much.
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Starward commented on: 5 MONTHS by arussell1965 2 years 25 weeks ago
He also said that he believed: He also said that he believed that Heaven would be, for each individual present there, like the place that person most enjoyed.  For him, it was the Cornwall coast, where he did watercolor paintings; or anywhere Helen was,  For me, it would be my Grandparents' place, in the rural area on SR 4, just north of Germantown.  I hope this also helps.
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Starward commented on: NEW FRIEND by arussell1965 2 years 25 weeks ago
What a beautiful love poem. : What a beautiful love poem.  May I send you a PM about it?
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Starward commented on: Reply To Lyrycsyntyme by J-C4113D 2 years 25 weeks ago
What a fantastic metaphor for: What a fantastic metaphor for a poem---one of yours, of course.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Reply To Lyrycsyntyme by J-C4113D 2 years 25 weeks ago
You have me thinking about the Red Masque: And it certainly seems that murder often wears the face of death. Those who live in castles built of blood bricks cannot avoid the drops infiltrating their make up kits.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Neo-Tzar by allets 2 years 25 weeks ago
Sounds good - I look forward.: Sounds good - I look forward.
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Starward commented on: Neo-Tzar by allets 2 years 25 weeks ago
Thank you.  As this is Lady: Thank you.  As this is Lady A's comment section, I will reply to your comment more thoroughly in a prose piece on my own page.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Neo-Tzar by allets 2 years 25 weeks ago
Oh, I definitely believe you: Oh, I definitely believe you are on to what was a significant part of it. What we now think of the Western aristocracy was not happy that the Czar family and their ruling companions weren't interested in the same global vision. Which made the West very happy to facilitate Lenin's ambitions (despite outward appearances), including the bloody slaughter of the Czar's family.   Ultimately, it seems that what might be called "beta versions" of modern intelligence agences in the West ensured Lenin's passage into Russia for the revolution in a barrel. The rise of a marxist adversary also helped crush labor movements in most Western nations, especially the United States, where labor was closely tied to socialism, which was somewhat closely tied to marxism. For one, I don't believe the facilitating of a rise of that adversary was a miscalculation or an accident.
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deepblue commented on: The Eighth Wonder by deepblue 2 years 25 weeks ago
Thank you :) I think it needs: Thank you :) I think it needs a little more TLC but all in due time, thanks for reading!
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