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patriciajj commented on: The Fallen. by sweetwater 1 year 47 weeks ago
This elegantly crafted and: This elegantly crafted and deeply moving treasure deserves great recognition. It's not only a worthy tribute to our heroes, but a compact monument of intricate grandeur and timeless beauty. Simply stunning.  
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Wordman commented on: Autumn Bones. by sweetwater 1 year 47 weeks ago
Thank you for inviting us to: Thank you for inviting us to your Autumn, it's a joy to share. I enjoyed this, very much.
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patriciajj commented on: What rhymes with Whimsical...? by SSmoothie 1 year 47 weeks ago
Thank you for the kind words.: Thank you for the kind words. Now YOU made MY day! 
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Starward commented on: fallen by arqios 1 year 47 weeks ago
Late autumn always has that: Late autumn always has that "end of an era" feeling to me, and this poem feels just like that.  You always deploy your words with tremendous skill.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Autumn Bones. by sweetwater 1 year 47 weeks ago
You've somehow taken me to a: You've somehow taken me to a very specific memory in my life. One that was not profound in any of the ways memories typically are. But standing before a scene with everything stripped away and calm, with sight distance limited so as to call away distractions - that was a true gift in a moment of need. I've not thought about it all of these years, till your words conjured up the recall. : ) Thanks. Your pen is a paint brush, as always.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Facing the Tide by lyrycsyntyme 1 year 47 weeks ago
I love and appreciate that: I love and appreciate that you picked up on that! At the onset of writing this, it came along quite naturally and without thought, just trusting the feeling of the flow, and then I became more conscience of it as the got deeper into the poem. Just being in the metaphor and hearing the waves of the tide - having grown up and lived much of my life close to the shore - created a sort of back beat, poetically speaking.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Upside Down World by lyrycsyntyme 1 year 47 weeks ago
Thank you very much,: Thank you very much, Patricia. This one is indeed intended for a song. You always do a fine job of picking that up, among your many insights as a reader. Always grateful. 
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: The Poet That Never Sleeps by lyrycsyntyme 1 year 47 weeks ago
Thank you kindly, for what: Thank you kindly, for what feels like such an truly generous remark. This one has become one of my favorites to have written right from the instant of creation, so I am especially grateful that it has been so well received by someone such as yourself.
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crypticbard commented on: asteriskos by arqios 1 year 47 weeks ago
And most likely briefly: And most likely briefly powerful in the same breath. A very delicate balance, much like the oriental forms of poetry. It requires a finer movement in curating both in the production and reception/hosting. And my gratitude is great for your having hosted this and other like poems. As vassals of the Muse we are compelled to host anything that issued forth from the Muse's fount, in a manner of understanding.
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Pungus commented on: The Poet That Never Sleeps by lyrycsyntyme 1 year 47 weeks ago
Something special: It's easy to recognize how extremely elevated, eloquent, intelligent etc your writing style is. You are so clear and self-aware; it shows like gemstones in your dope diamond flow.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Friday, November 9th, 1888 by J-C4113D 1 year 47 weeks ago
Mary Kelly's proximity to the: Mary Kelly's proximity to the prostitution circles that The Ripper targeted were enough to make her a target, and perhaps - as you posit - accidental bait for the demise of the mysterious serial killer. In considering your theory, which I'd have to agree is very plausible, I've been considering what the motives of a female Ripper might be. Perhaps one betrayed and scorned lover of a man whom had been with prostitutes behind her back? Perhaps a woman from a home broken in such a manner? Though I'd anticipate that a woman with children would have a difficult time, in that day, leaving into the night to go on a murderous rampage. Unless, perhaps, herself the grown daughter of a family in which she watched such unfold between her parents? Or perhaps religious or cultural zealotry gone too far? Well, it goes without much saying that going on a killing spree would be going much too far in any of these scenarioes. Any specific thoughts, yourself, on a character profile of your Ripper?   I remember reading, and separately seeing in a documentary, once upon a time a theory that the Ripper was from a prominent family, and thus why he (or, as you make a strong case for, she) was never identified. Perhaps that's part of the truth - and if Mary Kelly did survive and escape - might have further afforded her being left to start a new life, as reporting her alive would have led to the obvious question: whose body was dismembered?
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: YOUR MOTHER’S ADVICE by georgeschaefer 1 year 47 weeks ago
haha. : haha. 
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Starward commented on: Friday, November 9th, 1888 by J-C4113D 1 year 47 weeks ago
Thank you.  : Thank you.  
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georgeschaefer commented on: YOUR MOTHER’S ADVICE by georgeschaefer 1 year 47 weeks ago
I did call Jill but I didn't: I did call Jill but I didn't really have a good time.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Friday, November 9th, 1888 by J-C4113D 1 year 47 weeks ago
Thank you for sharing further: Thank you for sharing further insight. I enjoyed reading it earlier, but in squeezing reading time between a very physically taxing day, haven't really mustered the energy for the type of response I'd like to give. Just getting done for the day (or perhaps I should say 'night') in the wee hours, but will revisit tomorrow. Thanks again, it's quite fascinating.   p/s No worries about the typo.
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