You're welcome - my pleasure, as ever: While nothing exotic or startling was found at the site, but numerous items from the time (I recall pans, candlestick holders, dishes) - items that would probably be far more exciting to find if it were a thousand years down the road and all of these cultural items were by gone or completely different (I suppose the candlestick holders might already qualify), but none the less cool to uncover. The documentarian also found some of the structure, I believe the most evident being parts of the chimney/hearth.
You did a fine job in your tribute, and just the same your piece stands on it's own. I do love Shirley Jackson's writing style, and have enjoyed some talented voices retelling Haunting of Hill House. Turn of the Screw is also a fine work, and probably contains one of the best Horror titles created. I am unfamiliar with Sarban - which of his related works would you recommend as a start?
Thank you. You have piqued: Thank you. You have piqued my curiosity: what kind of artifacts were found on that site?
The house I described in this poem actually exists on a high ridge above the interstate highway that I have traveled, from time to time, to visit my old college. Several times, my daughter, then a teenager, accompanied me in the evenings, and when we passed that house both of us found it disturbing. Once, and just one, we saw one window illuminated, but, on all other times it was entirely dark. Neither of us cared to find out more about it.
In writing about it, I am well aware that Shirley Jackson's Haunting Of Hill House is still the final word, in prose, on desciptions of haunted houses; with, in my opinion, a very close second being Bly House in Henry James' tale, Turn Of The Screw. And the horror writer Sarban (mentioned in the poem's dedication) was very good about describing haunted landscapes. So I thought I would try my own in a poem.
Thank you so much for visiting the poem, and commenting.
George, how much do you think: George, how much do you think people are driven by the mistaken notion of one day getting more, versus the primal drive of wanting to win (even if they the "win" is nothing more than bragging rights on the way to a shared demise)?
Precision: I have no idea if there's only one place like that in the world, but I am quite confident that there is only one case in which such a gritty stop has been so poetically described. It's hard to believe your dart didn't hit dead center in capturing the mood.
Quite a tale: Do the dead know they are gone? Especially when we, ourselves, aren't even sure if they aren't still there. A capturing haunting.
Your introduction of this house and the way that certain ones locally take on a certain cultural significance (in one manner or another) reminds me of a town not terribly far from my neck of the woods, known as Red House. It was so-named, of course, due to a Red House that greeted eyes at the split in the "highway" of the era, letting an intending visitor know they had reached their exit. The house no longer exists, but someone did a low budget short documentary on it, and found some artifacts at the site.
Keep at this good medicine.: Keep at this good medicine. Interested to see where it leads. My favorite line, thus far: "Anyways, when he took a breathe from all the bragging..."
I dearly miss you being here.: I dearly miss you being here. Your energy, your insight, your perspectives. An encourager, in addition to being an expander of edges - I thank you, and I hope you're out there in the world to eventually return. Most of all, I hope that where ever you are, the universe is keeping up with your passion for exploration, experience, voice and life.
Powerful ode to the meaning: Powerful ode to the meaning of a life dedicated to better days. We are so small, but small is still capable of something real.
Snoring, what a dilemma. We: Snoring, what a dilemma. We both snore and both rely on our respironic machines. So this distance is real even in the closeness of proximity. It's all too real at certain moments and whole periods.
Thank you kindly. I am: Thank you kindly. I am gladdened to hear that there is ointment to be had. Wasn't really sure how this would work out. So just run with the feeling and the words that accompanied it. Most grateful to your kind response.