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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Bosphorus Touch by shewhodwellsint... 1 year 37 weeks ago
You're welcome, thank you too: You're welcome, thank you too - very enjoyable : )
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mysweetdakini commented on: Bosphorus Touch by shewhodwellsint... 1 year 37 weeks ago
Thank You for your kindness:): Many Blessings _()_
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: ORDERING FOOD TO GO by georgeschaefer 1 year 37 weeks ago
One of the most memorable: One of the most memorable rants I've ever witnessed involved a person delaring anew their concerns over capitalism and climate change while ordering some styrofoam-packaged food with their smart phone in their hand, computer on their lap, and 55 inch screen t/v blaring in the backround. Then, when the "Ring" device revealed the delivery guy was at the door, that was a most poetic finale.    I don't remember what specific points they made, of course.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Bosphorus Touch by shewhodwellsint... 1 year 37 weeks ago
This "just being" - perhaps: This "just being" - perhaps something that most, if not all of us, could use a little more of, in this day and age. Especially, when shared : ) A great foundation, indeed. Quite a beautiful presentation.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: commit to pen by arqios 1 year 37 weeks ago
Deeply felt, a gentle flow.: Deeply felt, a gentle flow.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Top 5 best business ideas in today's environment by MikeMellow 1 year 37 weeks ago
I've got one that tops your: I've got one that tops your whole list    #1 - Be born to a really rich family.    The fail upwards recipe for success.
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williamjroneyiii commented on: Jenny The Ho by williamjroneyiii 1 year 37 weeks ago
Jenny The Ho:   "The Process"   I watch Cable TV and get a line or two to work with. I'm ready for bed was the line I picked up off a commerical. Had to write a line that rhymes with bed "said" in it. My prayers are often answered, I just had to throw that line in there. I gave Jenny feelings for her to make a decision on a guy. Everybody in High School has a ho, so I threw that into the mix. Jenny has to practice beening a ho at the school function for the story to work. So Jenny had to start a fight. The narrator walks away with jenny for life. End of  story of Jenny.
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crypticbard commented on: Strike an appetite by humanfruit 1 year 37 weeks ago
Asceticism is for the birds,: Asceticism is for the birds, that's a 21st C urban response. The way the world is today, we wouldn't have all the ingredients to make it successfully work. An approximate ascetic lifestyle might be more apt. But that is just one opinion. Hope you had a good new year. Please pardon my being away sporadically.
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Starward commented on: Jenny The Ho by williamjroneyiii 1 year 37 weeks ago
When you set sight on a: When you set sight on a jingle to write like this one that calls Jenny a "ho." from whence comes the urge that kickstarts the surge that makes the words gather and go? Or is ir a Muse, shod in sensible shoes that brings your lines to gnition? Does the "quiet and calm"* provide a smooth balm that blossoms into fruition? [* from the title of Wallace Stevens' poem, "The House Was Quiet And The World Was Calm"]
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Why This Madness by satishverma 1 year 37 weeks ago
It seems that: Love is the ultimate paradox.
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patriciajj commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Poem For Patriciajj by S74rw4rd 1 year 37 weeks ago
It's no small thing to be a: It's no small thing to be a messenger, to be a willing a vessel of hope and restoration. Certainly you'll be rewarded, but for now, just know that you made all the difference. Every happiness, every blessing to you.   
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patriciajj commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; *The Word Of The Lord Is Right, And All His Works* by S74rw4rd 1 year 37 weeks ago
The eloquence keeps coming .: The eloquence keeps coming . . .   You're most welcome.  
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patriciajj commented on: My life’s first breath by ewbonitz 1 year 37 weeks ago
The poetry came back with: The poetry came back with beauty and wonder! And congratulations to you for taking the path of courage, hope and renewal: for choosing life! You should be proud of yourself. I know the struggles, and you certainly are not alone.   Thank you for your warm and candid reply.  
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: THANKYOU DR. B by joy 1 year 37 weeks ago
Thank you, heart warming nostalgia: This is a beautiful, earthy tribute to both a person who touched your lives and our lasting human interconnectivity, when opened to it.
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ewbonitz commented on: My life’s first breath by ewbonitz 1 year 37 weeks ago
I appreciate all the kind: I appreciate all the kind words you've spoken. I haven't written poetry for nearly a decade, until recently, that is, I started writing again. My wife left me, and began an affair with two separate co-workers. Well... damn... in September I was planning on setting my affairs in order, writing a suicide note, and eating a bullet. I got help instead; had myself hospitalized, started seeing a therapist, started medication and resolved instead to live. And now, would you look at that, the poetry came back. Funny how it works that way...
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