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S74RW4RD's picture

The poem sounds like a

The poem sounds like a whispered conversation---and the fourth and fifth lines, along with the last, are comforting and reassuring.  Although brief, the poem is emotionally powerful.


Starward

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Thank you kindly for your

Thank you kindly for your much welcome comment.


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lyrycsyntyme's picture

Deeply felt, a gentle flow.

Deeply felt, a gentle flow.

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Thanks John, your words are

Thanks John, your words are much welcome and heartily appreciated. Happy new year.


here is poetry that doesn't always conform

galateus, arkayye, arqios,arquious, crypticbard, excalibard, wordweaver

lyrycsyntyme's picture

Happy New Year to you, as

Happy New Year to you, as well. Thank you : )