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Starward commented on: Free 2023 Movies Streaming Popular Websites by afdahpro 1 year 30 weeks ago
In what way does this qualify: In what way does this qualify as a poem? You call it a blog post.  You are correct.  You have written a blog post, and it is not a poem.  Although I cannot speak officially for PostPoems, I have been a member here for over twenty years, so I think I have some credibility to say that PostPoems showcases POETRY and blog posts.  I have nothing against you personally, bur this blog post you have written seems to me to be an intrusion and an imposition.
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Beavis commented on: Dirty Footprints on your Heart, Again by Beavis 1 year 30 weeks ago
;-): You always get me! I love you Darling! Keep on rocking, writing and be the beautiful person that you are! Love you!
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patriciajj commented on: Corporate Captured by lyrycsyntyme 1 year 30 weeks ago
A highly insightful statement: A highly insightful statement about the infiltration of soulless technology and corporate culture, or, as you cleverly called it, "corporate capture", into too many aspects of our lives.   Your savvy, perceptive commentary radiates with wit and truth, and I found it very easy to connect to (and thoroughly enjoy) because of your spontaneous, casual style. Nothing preachy or condescending here. Just undeniable reality, cunningly exposed. I wanted to quote my favorite lines, but I loved them all.   A stunning examination of our lives in the digital crypt.    
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patriciajj commented on: NATURE THE CHILD by joy 1 year 30 weeks ago
This is one of the most: This is one of the most charming and applicable personifications of nature I've ever had the pleasure of reading. You succeeded in creating a heartfelt connection to the Earth's inner child, and presented an urgent message at the end. A wonderful invitation to nurture our world.
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nasheed commented on: لله يا غائبين by nasheed 1 year 30 weeks ago
شكرا ووردا وألف مرحبا: شكرا ووردا وألف مرحبا باتريشا
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Teytonon commented on: David's Mercy to Goliath by saiom 1 year 30 weeks ago
You state David converted the heart of Goliath: You state David converted the heart of Goliath On the veracity of that statement  No one can vouch The least we can say Is David had a rough day When he got home He had to Goliath on the couch I enjoyed it.
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sweetwater commented on: Two Mugs And A Smile. by sweetwater 1 year 30 weeks ago
Thank you Wordman, they: Thank you Wordman, they usually put their mugs in the sink so when they have left the reality of being alone comes back, so to see their mugs left where they were sitting and having to carry them to the kitchen remimded me of the days when I had a family here to look after. That was such a lovely feeling. I'm so tired of being on my own, one needs to feel useful and needed i think. At least they are only a few miles away, not in another town or worse another country.
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Starward commented on: speak from your scars by ewbonitz 1 year 30 weeks ago
There is a paradox in this: There is a paradox in this poem:  its relative brevity, and the way the lines are formatted make for an interesting poem.  But, if I may say so with the utmost respect, its subject matter is so poignant that it is also a difficukt poem to read.  But, towering above those aspects (which, balance each other out), is this aspect:  it is a very important poem to read!!!!!!
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Teytonon commented on: The Canary by randyjohnson 1 year 31 weeks ago
I’m sorry for your loss : I'm sorry for your loss. Hope this will make you feel better.   https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=vZw35VUBdzo
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Starward commented on: liberation by ewbonitz 1 year 31 weeks ago
This is a tremendous: This is a tremendous testimony to hope and faith, and I applaud the way it is formatted on the screen---its appearance as a particular power to the individual words and the lines those words form.
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Starward commented on: At Lenin's Tomb, Moscow, 1, A Smug Bolshevik Holds Forth by S74rw4rd 1 year 31 weeks ago
Thank you for validating an: Thank you for validating an opinion I have had for a long time, that red screams.  And I loved your phrase, "molding ideology."  At the moment, that ideology is far less intact than Lenin is.  However, I once saw an editorial cartoon, decades ago, but so horrifying I have never forgotten it, although I now could not be able to find it (and am glad I cannot).  It depicted Lenin creeping from his tomb as a resuscitated Communism; and the look that was drawn on his face was so sinister, so terrifying, and, if I may use the word, demonic, that I threw the paper away before I had finished reading the news.  I don't know if you ever watched whas broadcast as the first episode of a triology that Rod Serling called Night Gallery, and which became the series.  It featured a painting of a cemetery which showed a dead man climbing from his grave.  As terrifying as those paints were, the editorial cartoon of Lenin was worse. And, I am still grinning broadly (so broadly I think the other residents in my home think I am up to something---maybe waiting for Norfolk Southern's stock to nose-dive, so I can afford some) at your phrase, your tremendously magnificent phrase, "to deny the old corpse."  That is one for the quotations books, and deserves to join all those other magnificent phrases that are a staple and a glory of your Poetic accomplishment.
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patriciajj commented on: At Lenin's Tomb, Moscow, 1, A Smug Bolshevik Holds Forth by S74rw4rd 1 year 31 weeks ago
A not-so-fond farewell to the: A not-so-fond farewell to the red menace that begins, before the first word is read, with the color of blood and screams (Yes, red has a sound).   I took great pleasure in this brilliant rebuke at the grave where relics of the past still cling to a molding ideology. This line explodes:   "whose lives are cheap, frayed threads yanked from warped spools."   You aimed and fired with triumphant wit, and what a clever choice to deny the old corpse the dignity of a formal, metrical sonnet.     Excellent work!  
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patriciajj commented on: لله يا غائبين by nasheed 1 year 31 weeks ago
قوي وجميل. ممتاز!: قوي وجميل. ممتاز!
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Wordman commented on: Two Mugs And A Smile. by sweetwater 1 year 31 weeks ago
lonliness is eased to a: lonliness is eased to a certain degree by fond memories such as this, and in your sharing, we all benefit.  Here's a wish for more time together soon for all of you.   
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Teytonon commented on: Ouija Talk by ramonathompsont 1 year 31 weeks ago
Well done!: Well done! I admit I'm not familiar with the Kix song. Nice use of creepy imagery. Thanks for posting.
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