so sad that today's children: so sad that today's children and parents have to live thru such horrors. I pray everyday we don't have to hear about more carage and yet......what has happened to our once innocent world?
Wow, profound and real. I had: Wow, profound and real. I had guttural sound of acceptance it is what it is and a sigh is a very good indication of a great poem! Hugss
Wow this is quite dark and: Wow this is quite dark and boding l. I see demons sporting like wheat saying we are legion waiting to be cast out by the new day and the resurrection... always cleverly constructed and well placed verse! Very affecting!
<p>This is just gorgeous!: <p>This is just gorgeous! From top to bottom every word as if it should have always been there! Perfect spring poem! Cheerss </p>
Yup. That's about where I am: Yup. That's about where I am at spells are written thus qe call it spelling. Conflict delete my poems that evoke anything do they? Are they more than mere expression and exorcising demons or giving them life? At least I have a faith that will thwart ideas like that. Deep. Very nicely pulled unwilling thoughts from me. Hugss ss
Great and wise words here! A: Great and wise words here! A contemplative poem that sets the reader on a path to the glory of being humble/ humbled. No shame in that, only lessons. Hugss
Are you a welder? My father: Are you a welder? My father is even at nearly 80 years old! Evocative of the concrete jungle. I used to hammer the stage off the welds... when I was quite young and after on school holidays. Good times.
Ah yes true, ne'er truer word: Ah yes true, ne'er truer word spoken peoples are complex and complicated, sometimes diametrically opposed other times aligned and resonant. Thanks for your care and commentary cheers ss.
Lovely and sad. Poignant!: Lovely and sad. Poignant! Lovely imagery with a punctuating sadness relieved by the warth of memories. Lovely write! Cheers ss