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Pungus commented on: Some Things Beyond Dimension by patriciajj 1 year 25 weeks ago
The abrupt end settles the: The abrupt end settles the dread intensity so shockingly into silence
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patriciajj commented on: I Doubt Your Love by metaphorist 1 year 25 weeks ago
You doubt it because you know: You doubt it because you know what true love is and you're too intelligent, too aware of your worth, to settle for a cheap imitation. I've been here as well and I admire your strong-willed, dignified candor in this delicate expression.  
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patriciajj commented on: Use-ta by djtj 1 year 25 weeks ago
You certainly captured the: You certainly captured the deep satisfaction of trading a demoralizing relationship for empowerment. You can't put a price on self-worth! A fun and whimsical goodbye.  
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Starward commented on: Mute by metaphorist 1 year 26 weeks ago
I am glad and grateful to: I am glad and grateful to hear that.
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metaphorist commented on: Mute by metaphorist 1 year 26 weeks ago
Thanks for your concern. It: Thanks for your concern. It is just an expression.
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Starward commented on: I Doubt Your Love by metaphorist 1 year 26 weeks ago
This one hurt to read.  I: This one hurt to read.  I have been in that situation, and my heart goes out to you.
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Starward commented on: (W)retched Poetry by metaphorist 1 year 26 weeks ago
Your verbal talent,: Your verbal talent, especially with metaphor, is endlessly fascinating.  Bravo!
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Starward commented on: Rotten by metaphorist 1 year 26 weeks ago
Let me say first that I: Let me say first that I disagree with your assertion in the final line, because someone rotten to the core could not produce the kind of poetry that you have.  That said, I will say again how much I admire the way you deploy and control your metaphors.
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Starward commented on: Mute by metaphorist 1 year 26 weeks ago
I dearly hope the final: I dearly hope the final quatrain is an expression and not an intention.  
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Starward commented on: Grayscale by metaphorist 1 year 26 weeks ago
I love the way you deploy: I love the way you deploy your metaphors.  Your screen name is so very, very appropriate; and your verbal artistry is so very, very skillful.
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Starward commented on: Small by metaphorist 1 year 26 weeks ago
I have fallen behind in: I have fallen behind in reading your wonderful poems as they appear, and I apologize for this unintentional neglect.  This reminds me of a science fiction story, from the thirties, that I first read in December, 1977 (when I was going through a situation very similar to what your poem describes) about a person (whether human or not I was never sure when reading the story) who began to shrink so small that atoms seemed like galaxies, and so on and so on.  This poem reminded me of that situation,
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: He's Unimportant by lyrycsyntyme 1 year 26 weeks ago
'Why should we care?' -: 'Why should we care?' - Indeed, the question.
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Spinoza commented on: Zombie by Seraphim 1 year 26 weeks ago
take a break from the media:   We all go into zombie mode from time to time. There’s a lot of darkness prowling the world nowadays. Sometimes we just need to withdraw for awhile, to find our way back, to rediscover our centre.
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Spinoza commented on: HAPPY EASTER by joy 1 year 26 weeks ago
enjoyed this:   A moment of peace in the morning breeze with twinkling stars above the trees.   I enjoyed this.
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Starward commented on: HAPPY EASTER by joy 1 year 26 weeks ago
I applaud this poem.  Back in: I applaud this poem.  Back in July of 1974, on a Friday night (I was not, then, smart enough to make note of the date), I had a similar experience.  I have never forgotten that event and what transpired after that.
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