I enjoyed this you nailed: I enjoyed this you nailed it.in more ways than one. Strong writing, not overtly descriptive but vernacular oozing through the constant struggle for atonement peace and connection... etc... I very nice garden to get lost in. Hugss ss
As I said sadness and loss: As I said sadness and loss the enigma that is tragedy... so concisely yet almost as perfunctorily as breathing it resonates in inner knowing.
WOW!!! what everyone else: WOW!!! what everyone else said and more ! Its a whole universe of experience said in one piece. Deeper than deep, higher than high, we reach so far searching for home only to find we're already there in it... profound, touching, relevant and moving. Only love can inspire work like this all tge many kinds...
Bravo!
Hugss
Thank you so very much for: Thank you so very much for those kind words, and sharing a part of your history with me. I am very grateful for your comment. Although the numbers say 50 and 22 years, respectively, sometimes the time feels like it was just yesterday.
Using calliope in regard to: Using calliope in regard to the colors seems, to me, a perfectly acceptable metaphor, and I am sorry if some narrow minded person criticized your use of it. But, nevertheless, the poem is very beautiful.
Thanks for your comment.: Thanks for your comment.
Hey, do you realize if you take 'CrushApples' and scramble the letters, you come up with 'Purchase LP's'?
Why? Do you feel it's a good investment?, a hedge against inflation?
I recently came into a small inheritance and I've been searching for a place to invest it. I was reading about cryptocurrency. No way I'm putting my money in that! Too risky for me.
LP's? I hadn't given it much thought, honestly. The question is, where would I get them? People don't use LP's anymore. Get with the times, my friend!
I have an appointment with my financial advisor in a couple of weeks. I'll bring up your suggestion about the LP's. If he tells me to do it, I'll get a new financial advisor. Ha ha. Just kidding. I'll let you know what happens. Have a good weekend!
Superbly delicious to retrace: Superbly delicious to retrace our steps in poetry. For my part I venture to say that my parents' permitting poetry to be part of our daily yhousehold routine, most of which (age appropriately) would be nursery rhymes and poetic tales. From soaking all that in and moving to a more active interphase with poetry began when i was 4 and had to memorise "Cat" by Mary Britton Miller, complete with gesturing and interpretative movement. If pushed I most possibly could recite this poem from memory, lol. And since that time 'yawning of cats' has been a permanently etched image in my psyche.
Starlite didn't have much of an impact on my poetic activity. And as you have explained quite tellingly was not a very promising choice of a venue and environment in which poetry could be lived in or grown from. The aspect of PostPoems that you mention was the main reason for the overly long extended hiatus that I found myself in. But that is the way, isn't it.
Allow us to celebrate with you on 50 years of poetry and 22 years on PostPoems!
Thank you :
Thank you. I have been rewriting this one for decades, but the first stanza has usually stayed the same. I think I used a calliope of color first draft instead of canopy because I wanted to portray a wild colorful ceiling over their heads. But I got called out fir mixing metaphors or something. Plus I would mispronunciate calliope lol It means a lot that you read and comment. Debbie
Thank you for the comment. : Thank you for the comment. What I noticed most about the original Scofield was his virulent anti-semitism, as well as an implied disrespect to the earliest Christians who were, like Jesus, Hebrews. Scofield also seemed to think that only Paul's epistles were of theological value to the Church; he even relegated the four Gospels to "Jewish writings." The second edition (which is the one I purchased new in 1976, and just received again, used, this week) was published in 1967. The second edition removed Scofield's prejudices altogether, and dispensed with his ideas about how to "rightly divide" the New Testament---which is, properly, one unit.
Thanks again for the comment.