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lyrycsyntyme commented on: The Deep Wounds of Short Cuts by lyrycsyntyme 1 year 12 weeks ago
Thank you, sir, for such a: Thank you, sir, for such a generous, in-depth analysis of "The Deep Wounds.." To see the way it sparked a connection with you, Patricia and Cascade is a real honor for me. I believe that's a strong indication that I've written something of real meaning, and I'm very grateful for that, as well.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: The Deep Wounds of Short Cuts by lyrycsyntyme 1 year 12 weeks ago
Thank you very much,: Thank you very much, Patricia. Life, no matter how much we try to domesticate it, is indeed a perilous wilderness. But it's also a fertile and fruitful one, if we allow it to be.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Opposers . . . Cower: You Have Nothing To Lose That Was Ever Really Yours by J-C4113d 1 year 12 weeks ago
Excellent work: As history, the present, and - I imagine - the future goes, the next participants in oppression are often from the previously oppressed.
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Tetra_nova commented on: Ripple by Tetra_nova 1 year 12 weeks ago
Thank you so much: To have the acknowledgement from someone as yourself, an accomplished and award winning writer, I'm absolutely elated to her you enjoyed my work. I hope the rest of it brings you to similar places.    Thank you again~ you're awesome 
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patriciajj commented on: Ripple by Tetra_nova 1 year 12 weeks ago
What a delight to discover a: What a delight to discover a superior sculptor of words! I was seized by the first line and held spellbound throughout by the casual dexterity, the intense truth of it, the beautiful, beautiful realness that gleams even brighter than the artistry. Which is considerable!   You end this magnificently crafted, sigh-worthy, elevated heartsong the best way a love poem can end: with a promise. And that promise, that gift, is love itself.   Wow! And Wow!  
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Wordman commented on: Rhapsody of the Realms by patriciajj 1 year 12 weeks ago
Another page in the book I: Another page in the book I never tire of reading. Sculpting and painting words as fine pieces of art, capturing their beauty, and then unleashing your vision to be shared by the soul.  It is always my pleasure to visit here. Thank you for these inspiring  invitations. 
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Starward commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Prayer To God, And To All Of PostPoems, For Forgiveness by J-C4113d 1 year 12 weeks ago
With huge embarrassment, I: With huge embarrassment, I humbly ask you to forgive my incompetence in neglecting to reply to this comment in a timely manner.  You words are very kind, and I really appreciate them, but due to either a missed email from the system, or just plain inability to organize my efforts at the time, I sure did miss offering a response.  Please accept my sincere apology, and a promise to at least strive to do better going forward.
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Starward commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Apostolic Letter From Evaristus, Bishop Of Rome by J-C4113d 1 year 12 weeks ago
Thank you so much for: Thank you so much for visiting this poem, and for your kind comment.  I am especially encounraged by your comment about the portrait from John's early days with Jesus.  I sometimes wonder if he was not bullied for being perceived as "different," and this may have brought him to the very close friendship with Jesus.  And he alone went into the high priest's house on that awful night preceding Good Friday, and also stood at the cross---the emblem and meas of the ultimate bullying.  I had, last night while writing this, thought of the possibilities of at least one other poem about young John, and your words have encouraged me to proceed with a draft of that idea.  Thank you so very, very much.
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patriciajj commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Apostolic Letter From Evaristus, Bishop Of Rome by J-C4113d 1 year 12 weeks ago
This correspondence of: This correspondence of supreme importance was a bold idea because only the best presentation would do, and you triumphed!   Stately elegance, inspiring faith and an epic musicality led me gracefully down each line, or rather, the steps, of your gleaming poetic monument. You threaded Biblical concepts into the unique and fluid elegy like a pro with everything flowing powerfully, seamlessly.   I thought it was a wonderful, whimsical touch to take artistic licence and paint an endearingly angelic portrait of the young Saint John.   A testimony of faith and a great showcase for your inborn talent. 
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Starward commented on: Hierarchy by satishverma 1 year 12 weeks ago
Excellent!!!: Excellent!!!
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Starward commented on: My Personal Tragedy by satishverma 1 year 12 weeks ago
In my opinion, the poem's: In my opinion, the poem's second stanza is key to the interpretation of all your poems in this style.
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Starward commented on: Ash In Eyes by satishverma 1 year 12 weeks ago
I think the eerie atmostphere: I think the eerie atmostphere of this poem is underscored most successfully by the Moon's yawn in the final line.
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Starward commented on: My Invisible Woes by satishverma 1 year 12 weeks ago
I like this poem, as I like: I like this poem, as I like all of yours in this style, but that final stanza really, really rocks!!!
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Starward commented on: Ripple by Tetra_nova 1 year 12 weeks ago
I hope you will finish more: I hope you will finish more hanging projects and post them here.  I do not always keep up well with my reading committments.  My health seems to be declining a little more rapidly this summer than I had expected, and I cannot always concentrate on my reading.
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Tetra_nova commented on: Ripple by Tetra_nova 1 year 12 weeks ago
Thank you, that's quite: Thank you, that's quite wonderful of you to say. My gratitude in that regard is ineffable. I have been inspired to finish some hanging projects and I don't write often, so your kind words are greatly encouraging~
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