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SSmoothie commented on: Irrepressible Flame (In Memory of saiom) by patriciajj 1 year 11 weeks ago
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Starward commented on: Blood is thicker than air by SSmoothie 1 year 11 weeks ago
The intense emotion that: The intense emotion that powers this poem is so raw that its authenticity cannot be question.  This is a transcript from human experience that cannot be questioned.  And despite the increasing degree of intensity, that line after line delivers, nothing prepares the reader for the final line---which carries a final shock that will linger after the actual reading experience has come to its end.
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SSmoothie commented on: Blood is thicker than air by SSmoothie 1 year 11 weeks ago
Just manic thoughts: Just manic thoughts recounting so many slights on a recent visit. Quite painful when people can t see you. That's why  I treasure that you can see me through the waterfalls falling from my mind and always without judgement and very much with kindness understanding encouragement and support all the elements of agapi right there no small feat for strangers connected by aether, pixels and poetic expression. Hugss 
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SSmoothie commented on: Looking Starward, by SSmoothie 1 year 11 weeks ago
I'm glad you liked it, I hope: I'm glad you liked it, I hope one falls as easy when your name ignites fires in my mind which is oh, well quite often that it can do you justice. But as with all things the time must be right and of course available everything takes soooo long stuck left handed texting on a phone... hugss and much appreciation.  always ss 
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SSmoothie commented on: Looking Starward, by SSmoothie 1 year 11 weeks ago
Thank you. My hand is broken: Thank you. My hand is broken 9 don't have much time  but i know you have been feeling unwell and wanted you to know that you are so very important and your spectacular analysis and synthesis of ideas and knowlege of poems are highly respected and much admired. God bless you and keep you! Hugss glad you liked it. You were my inspiration on this. Hugss 
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Starward commented on: Looking Starward, by SSmoothie 1 year 11 weeks ago
I really have to work on: I really have to work on keeping up better with my reading on this site, because I am apparently falling behind just enough that I missed this beautiful poem when it posted.  Sorry for that, I am always too much "a day late and a dollar short."  I applaud the magnificence of your verbal skill, and all those memorable phrases of which they poem is made.  Honestly, I cannot pick a single favorite out of the array, because they are all so equally beautiful.  
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patriciajj commented on: Irrepressible Flame (In Memory of saiom) by patriciajj 1 year 11 weeks ago
What an inspiring send off! I: What an inspiring send off! I found great comfort in your elegant words. Thank you. 
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SSmoothie commented on: Irrepressible Flame (In Memory of saiom) by patriciajj 1 year 11 weeks ago
Another great postpomie gone: Another great postpomie gone to another dimension, to explore all the somany notions written about life  and its many phases. Deeply saddened by her loss and comforted by your tribute so beautiful and aprpropopo. A marvellous journey to you Siaom. Best blessings.
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Pungus commented on: prancing on petite feet by humanfruit 1 year 11 weeks ago
Yall's comments is better: Yall's comments is better than drugs I swear
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patriciajj commented on: What to Pack for Your Departure by patriciajj 1 year 11 weeks ago
Thank you so much for: Thank you so much for unearthing the heart of my expression and for leaving such marvelous, poetic encouragement. You are a treasure. Endless thanks!
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patriciajj commented on: Looking Starward, by SSmoothie 1 year 11 weeks ago
This is, hands down, my: This is, hands down, my favorite of yours! I almost don't want to touch its ethereal splendor with analysis or personal commentary because its truth shines impeccably on its own. My lack of expression, my breathlessness, trust me, is my homage to this sterling tribute.     I also can't choose a favorite line as I often like to do because each one is a crystalline thread in an embroidery of Light. I dare not pull one . . .   This is too beautiful to embellish, but impossible to pass by without praise.   Simply wondrous, brilliant Poet!
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SSmoothie commented on: What to Pack for Your Departure by patriciajj 1 year 11 weeks ago
Wow just wow and all the wows: Wow just wow and all the wows necessary to describe this fantastic sojourn through breaking through to reality and nature and the power within which leads to the power without.... incredible descriptions prefect nuance. Beautiful and balanced, perfectly weighted, as deep as it is high and so much more! Wow Andrea! Just wow!  Incredible work patricia. Brilliance and beyond! Hugss 
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SSmoothie commented on: I Chime Cheddar, Danette by humanfruit 1 year 11 weeks ago
Um wow! Just so much in: Um wow! Just so much in this... I can't even... the writing beautiful the style excellent the format perfect, the content broodingly pretty, achingly horrific... serious and switched on. Everyday thoughts with big picture ruminations. I wish I had time to say it all... but sometime to be more sussinct your talent is more than showing! Bravo & Hugss !!!
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SSmoothie commented on: prancing on petite feet by humanfruit 1 year 11 weeks ago
My favourite thing is your: My favourite thing is your duality and the broken use of grammar or lack there of can easily twist the reader into many directions and fractals of the poetic nuance. My favourite of these:   "sauntered upon that secret path, never known by imagination bewitched the confines of my home,"   I read it many different ways until I found the one that I resonated with  Which was  The secret path travelled upon by those who have not had their imagination compromised by the gamut of controlling ideas where ideas are still free  And that is where you live untainted or rather unaffected, this made you impervious to minor fears    And hence we are re reminded of bones with no flesh and no warmth, lifeless, but daisy chains triumph through the vortex of mind peace overcomes and with boldness gentleness arrives to conquer with hope and love    Stumbling on a vase handed down by grandmother  Used rather to store a deceased cat rather morosely yet pehaps daisies wore it [vase] better ! Yes YES Yes yes yes I liked it alot! Thanks for the fruit for thought.  Hugss 
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: FRIENDS by joy 1 year 11 weeks ago
Amen: ..to this. And right back at you.
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