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Thanks kindly. To be vituous: Thanks kindly. To be vituous in literature is quite satsisfying.

They tell me that this kind: They tell me that this kind of poem is really difficult to write:  poseurs and wannabe's cannot write to this level of quality.  But you have written it as if invented the concept, and I applaud your literary accomplishment here.

Stunning! An arrow of: Stunning! An arrow of splendour hitting the heart of its target with its own description! I agree whole heartedly! 

Just incredible! A perfectly: Just incredible! A perfectly executed dedication! Hugss

This hit home for me. It: This hit home for me. It brought me back in time to the first time I felt real love I was was getting ready for a date and brushing my hair in the mirror I heard the sound of thier very familiar sound of thier vehicle and looked at my face to see a smile stretching across the glass and I knew I was in love...

Sometimes love really feels: Sometimes love really feels like war and I'm just glad it's over

This poem was difficult to: This poem was difficult to read---not because of any flaw, but because of the verbal skill with which you deploy your words.  Your extended metaphor of warfare (for some reason, I kept thinking of images from WWI) is handled with exquisite skill, and thus, due to that skill, the poem is not at all easy to read.  That kind of difficulty is not a flaw; it is often a sign of a high degree of poetic art.