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a different kind of write. I: a different kind of write. I liked it. thanks for sharing

Thank you for this..: Thank you for this wonderful poem. If I may add the following: If only the years were knowledge I'm sure some of us, as we grow older Would accrue enough knowledge to graduate college While others, who no matter how old they get Still play the fool and will be in grade school And of course, there are a few, sad to say Who will still be in pre-K!  

It takes uncommon skill to: It takes uncommon skill to turn anguish into outstanding art.   What a ride! Every twist and turn of intricate thought, every juxtaposition of words, every jolt of unsettling reality was penned with sheer brilliance.   How I wanted to swim against some of your stark, immersive waves of defeat and travail, but I have been in this place at times myself and made the same observations about society that I couldn't help making a strong connection to your words. The fury, the catharsis, at the end was palpable.   A spectacular and explosive study of despair. Amazing stuff.  

Yes, its not easy,,: Yes, it's not easy in the morning When you find as day is dawning  You start to get that certain feeling A part of your anatomy  A part I will not mention, see Is pointing toward the ceiling Oh, but you must go to work Alas, there is no time to jerk..      

This is great!..: This is great! Really enjoyed reading it. So original and creative. Thanks for sharing it.

Cheers!: Cheers!