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Teytonon commented on: mystory by sootyash 42 weeks 4 days ago
Hi. So nice to hear from you..: Hi. So nice to hear from you.  I've been doing a little thinking  Folllowed by a lot of drinking  About what you said about poetry And how it goes well with misery If you were to take a poll Of all poets through history  I wouldn't be surprised to see  If asked if they're joyful or morose  The results would not be even close  So continue whining, don't stop moping  You'll be happy being sad, I'm hoping  
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S74rw4rd commented on: Elsewhere by Seraphim 42 weeks 4 days ago
I applaud your great Faith,: I applaud your great Faith, to which this poem testifies powerfully.
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Teytonon commented on: The Dusty Trinket by lyrycsyntyme 42 weeks 5 days ago
I hope you don’t mind..: I hope you don't mind Don't wish to be rude Have a comment on your poem Which I hope you'll include   Your point is not lost How it comes across What you tried to impart It touches my heart   This poem takes me back When I was a child A poor family, though money we'd lack My mom and dad tried to see that I smiled   When I was a boy, it still brought me joy When for my birthday, instead of a toy A card saying 'You know our love for you is deeply-rooted  Here are some batteries, toy not included'  
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Teytonon commented on: Bent by babyrockstarkb 42 weeks 5 days ago
I can sense there are..: I can sense there are some people Who you resent And would like nothing more Than them to torment Here is a good way I think you can vent Kill them and pack their body in cement  It may be expensive, but it's money well spent Don't care for my comment? It was well meant Hope you don't wish that I too should get bent    
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S74rw4rd commented on: Religion or Relationship by Seraphim 42 weeks 5 days ago
This is a magnificent: This is a magnificent testimony to the Faith.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: The Dusty Trinket by lyrycsyntyme 42 weeks 5 days ago
You're welcome - I"m glad to: You're welcome - I"m glad to hear that it's now long ago. Thank you, again, for sharing that with me.
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S74rw4rd commented on: The Dusty Trinket by lyrycsyntyme 42 weeks 5 days ago
Thank you for the reply.  It: Thank you for the reply.  It does not now haunt me; it ran out of steam in the mid-nineties.  But the poem definitely reminded me of its effects.  
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: The Dusty Trinket by lyrycsyntyme 42 weeks 5 days ago
I hope it doesn't haunt you,: I hope it doesn't haunt you, anymore, my friend. Thank you for reading and sharing how The Dusty Trinket connects with you.
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sootyash commented on: mystory by sootyash 42 weeks 5 days ago
haha: Its quite like that isnt it? Misery loves company and poetry
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S74rw4rd commented on: The Dusty Trinket by lyrycsyntyme 42 weeks 6 days ago
I have experienced a similar: I have experienced a similar situation.  It haunted me for years.  Your poem describes it very well.
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Teytonon commented on: I Wrote The Declaration of Independence by randyjohnson 42 weeks 6 days ago
Good job! I thoroughly enjoyed..: Good job! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I have a question. I've noticed in other poems of yours such as 'I Kicked Bill Clinton's Ass' and 'I Slept With Daffy Duck', you would say in the Authors Comments section 'This is a fictional poem'. I'm sure I speak for many of your followers to let you know how much that is appreciated. However, I don't see that comment here. Just to be clear, does that mean this actually happened?  
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S74rw4rd commented on: Rest In Peace, Hazel - Part II by randyjohnson 42 weeks 6 days ago
My heart goes out to you on: My heart goes out to you on the passing of Hazel.  Our chihuahua is in the final phase of her life, and we fear that any day she could succumb.  
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Teytonon commented on: Dichotomies by metaphorist 42 weeks 6 days ago
I have a question..: I have a question  I'll make it quick What's a dichotomy? The surgical removal of a dic? I realize that my manner's crude I always try to rise above it But, for one man in your poem, that dude For him, I think you'd really love it!    
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ramonathompsont commented on: He won’t Iron, Man by Teytonon 42 weeks 6 days ago
cute write: cute write
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patriciajj commented on: Unfinished Invocation by patriciajj 43 weeks 14 hours ago
Without fail you tunnel deep,: Without fail you tunnel deep, extract my vision and interpret, not only my message, but my intentions. And with such thunder and beauty!   I also love the way you connect your own experiences to my poems (and others' work as well), turning a poem into meaningful self-discovery or validation. To have a fellow poet walk with us so closely on our creative path is unbelievably gratifying. Anyone honored enough to receive your astute and personalized commentary knows what I mean.   But if that wasn't enough, you lit a fire of much-needed motivation under me by reminding me of our (not just my) mission to "explain the Cosmos to itself".   When you put it that way, how can I neglect my work?   May Heaven join me in my endless gratitude, stay with you on your poetic journey and bless you (Outrageously!) every step of the way.  
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