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Spinoza commented on: To bring some joy to earth by Spinoza 36 weeks 2 days ago
hope, always keep hope:   As gloomy as the world may seem at times in the way it’s going, Hope is an important thing.
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Spinoza commented on: Diverging Roads by Spinoza 36 weeks 2 days ago
yep:   It happens
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Spinoza commented on: A Blustery Day in the Bedroom by Spinoza 36 weeks 2 days ago
you said it all: just nature taking its course… you said it all, right there.
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Spinoza commented on: WHY I LOVE TO WALK IN NATURE by joy 36 weeks 2 days ago
All of Creation is majestic:   I love Nature for the very same reasons… for its spiritualness… for its lessons… for its beauty… and for the peace it gives to one’s soul. From the forests… to the seas… to the mountains… to the canopy of stars above, all of Creation is majestic.
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S74rw4rd commented on: Niner Liner: By Way Of Conversation by J-C4113D 36 weeks 2 days ago
Thank you.  I really: Thank you.  I really appreciate your validation of this poem.  When I write in this form, I try to make some of the lines sound like overheard statements without an accompanying context.  During my first real summer job, I worked for the County as a gopher on a survey crew.  On Fridays, we only worked until lunch time, spending the remaining four hours visiting various bars in different parts of the county.  I could not, of course, consume alchohol, so I drank more iced tea that sumer than I ever had before (confirming, or perhaps establishing, a lifelong personal compulsion to consume iced tea), and I also heard snippets of conversations, from other bar patrons, without very much context.  I began to love this kind of "overheard," not for the sake of being nosey, but of just hearing the language doing different things.  The next summer (during which I held the same job, but by that time we were monitored too closely to visit bars on Friday afternoons),  I had the same experience on the c.b., when me and my best friend, mobile on weekend nights, would "drive into range" of some very distant conversations, and would overheard some of the words without an accompanying context.  Sorry for the verbosity of my reply.
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patriciajj commented on: Niner Liner: By Way Of Conversation by J-C4113D 36 weeks 2 days ago
Stunning intricacy of thought: Stunning intricacy of thought and some phenomenal analogies explore the unrealistic hope of a utopia in our lifetime. The imagined fantastical future was constructed with your usual dexterity. Can never get enough of that!   Another showcase for your far-reaching imagination, fine Poet.   
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patriciajj commented on: To bring some joy to earth by Spinoza 36 weeks 2 days ago
What a brilliant strategy:: What a brilliant strategy: turning an enchanting childhood memory into a metaphor for unsinkable hope and an inspiring dream for humanity as a whole.   You accomplished so much, artistically, emotionally and philosophically, in this delicately woven treasure.   "But we were young and new and undaunted Bulging at the seams full tilt with wild dreams   Hoping to crack the vaulted canopy of heaven"   Have to read that again: just too good to enjoy once and move on.   
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patriciajj commented on: A Blustery Day in the Bedroom by Spinoza 36 weeks 2 days ago
Yes, things went off the: Yes, things went off the rails with "for your age",  but the speaker recovered . . . like a pro one might say.  No ego trip, no shouting match, just nature taking its course.   Enjoyed this playful, straight-shooting slice of life.        
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beaconzbard commented on: IN THIS TIME AND PLACE by beaconzbard 36 weeks 2 days ago
It's now on YouTube: You can now wtch/hear me read this one at:  https://youtube.com/shorts/gCc4JV0XstQ
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Teytonon commented on: I Slept With Despair by Diamond_Wills_N... 36 weeks 2 days ago
I slept with despair too..: I slept with despair too.  Many years ago, I slept with despair of girls I picked up in a bar. Two sisters. Wow! It was incredible! I'll never forget it! Oh, I liked your poem, by the way.
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ramonathompsont commented on: THANKFUL FOR VINCE LOMBARDY by joy 36 weeks 3 days ago
Long live the legend!: Long live the legend!
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S74rw4rd commented on: Moon will do Nothing by satishverma 36 weeks 4 days ago
Gosh I really enjoy these: Gosh I really enjoy these poems and this style of yours!
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Teytonon commented on: Misery Controlled by LittleLennonGurl 36 weeks 4 days ago
Your name : CHRISTINA HALACY = C ITCHY ANAL HAIRS
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LittleLennonGurl commented on: Misery Controlled by LittleLennonGurl 36 weeks 4 days ago
=D: Thank you!!!!!
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Teytonon commented on: A Good Swift Kick! by cathycavalcante 36 weeks 4 days ago
I can think of someone…: I can think of someone who needs a swift kick She makes some people sick She has a boyfriend who's a chief From her we can't get no relief You can try to e-mail her Or you can impale her If your pants don't fit And you need to let the waist out No, not let the waste out You're thinking of pooping What? So what? No, not so what Sew what? What? Who sews what? A whaler? A sailor? A blackmailer? Forget it...
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