Tell me what she is that i'm not.
Tell me what she does that i don't.
But if you give me a list and tell me to change,
I promise you baby, i won't.
Does she make you smile more than i do?
Does she make you laugh when you wanna cry?
I thought i did all of those things,
I thought we were on the same high.
Are you just mesmorized by her kiss?
And electrified by her touch?
I just wanna know, what you love about her,
And why i'm never enough.
I give you everything i can,
I give you every piece of me.
But i guess loving you, and you not loving me, has made me see,
That love has absolutely no guarantees.
Nice!
Hey there.
I love your style in poem making.
I'm sure you'll be making a-lot more poems.
I hope that I can see some more of this great work.
Regards,
Brian Crowell
Brian Crowell
Young poet, best believe you should know it.
Oh thank you so much, i
Oh thank you so much, i really appreciate it.
-Samantha
Samantha