Sundown Eyes


And the sky took with light

Reflected in my eyes; beaming

Feeling lighter and bright

Submerging my soul; dreaming


I’ve fallen into the crescent

A tight woven bond

Enriching the present

A long road too fond


A candle in the distance

Awakens the depths inside

A higher purpose of existence

From you, I cannot hide


I have fallen in to your grace

No sense of time; still

A torch for my darkened place

Adventures in twilight; surreal

k8ln14's picture

We have a really similar

We have a really similar style of writing,  and that's really awesome

Also, your poem, The Perfect as well as this one are really well thought out and nicely done

truthintragedies's picture

That's what I thought when I

That's what I thought when I read yours :) Thank you! Excited to read more from you.

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