My memory starts to fade away
i think ive taken too much today
my sight is blurred, its getting dark
im stuck in this scary amusememnt park
its getting late, i should wake up
i dont want this high to stop so abrupt
as my eyes struggle to open wide
im more than ready for that trippy ride
i try to locatre a thick, strong vein,
and ask myself if im still sane
this needle with my addiction drug
with it i never need a loving hug
because as i shoot it inside of me
i feel so alive, so beautiful, so free
someday ill stop, and get the help i need
but right now, im not ready for that kind of deed
until tomorrow, i may not awake
to tell you the story, of my life as a fake.
Tia Marie Thompson
as you probably have noticed
as you probably have noticed from many of my writtings I too struggle in the throws of addiction, only my vice are pills and not shooting up... I really do hope you are clean now but all in all you captured the emotion in this perfectly...
Well to b honest i never shot
Well to b honest i never shot up i as well prefer pill form but for this piece i looked at my friends and or family and got the inspiration for it
I thought this was a really good piece. The whole rhyming couplet structure works for it and I just enjoyed reading it. Keep up the kick-ass work.