Milked

They seem so strong 

stronger than me.

incessant neediness

milking my repartoire 

of competencies 

i need this and I need that 

an error of comedies

Strung throughout the days

 

i can't do this I can't do that 

an incompetent string 

wrapped around every finger

 

look up,

 

live and let love 

give and let live 

 

learn this

and I will rise

with you

not above you. 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

It's just not there today... :/ 

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Poetic_Eyes's picture

you can always...

you can always revise/edit/tweek it later if you feel the desire, but i personally like this poem and the concept behind it.

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Thanks poetic eyes ;D 

Thanks poetic eyes ;D 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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  A nice little poem, a

 

A nice little poem, a condiment bursting with flavor, and a lesson for all. Forceful, but still delicately sweet. Enjoyed it.

 

"Tired with all these, for restful death I cry,

 As to behold desert a beggar born,

 And needy nothing trimm'd in jollity,

 And purest faith unhappily forsworn,

 And gilded honour shamefully misplaced,

 And maiden virtue rudely strumpeted,

 And right perfection wrongfully disgraced,

 And strength by limping sway disabled

 And art made tongue-tied by authority,

 And folly, doctor-like, controlling skill,

 And simple truth miscalled simplicity,

 And captive good attending captain ill:

 Tired with all these, from these would I be gone,

 Save that, to die, I leave my love alone."

 

William Shakespeare

 

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Oh goodness I love a bit of

Oh goodness I love a bit of ol Willie! ;) what a perfect comment! Hugss SS 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."