They seem so strong
stronger than me.
incessant neediness
milking my repartoire
of competencies
i need this and I need that
an error of comedies
Strung throughout the days
i can't do this I can't do that
an incompetent string
wrapped around every finger
look up,
live and let love
give and let live
learn this
and I will rise
with you
not above you.
you can always...
you can always revise/edit/tweek it later if you feel the desire, but i personally like this poem and the concept behind it.
Thanks poetic eyes ;D
Thanks poetic eyes ;D
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
A nice little poem, a
A nice little poem, a condiment bursting with flavor, and a lesson for all. Forceful, but still delicately sweet. Enjoyed it.
"Tired with all these, for restful death I cry,
As to behold desert a beggar born,
And needy nothing trimm'd in jollity,
And purest faith unhappily forsworn,
And gilded honour shamefully misplaced,
And maiden virtue rudely strumpeted,
And right perfection wrongfully disgraced,
And strength by limping sway disabled
And art made tongue-tied by authority,
And folly, doctor-like, controlling skill,
And simple truth miscalled simplicity,
And captive good attending captain ill:
Tired with all these, from these would I be gone,
Save that, to die, I leave my love alone."
William Shakespeare
Oh goodness I love a bit of
Oh goodness I love a bit of ol Willie! ;) what a perfect comment! Hugss SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."