I would like

I would like to see more smiles from

the Central Valley Poets, that is if

you truly love poetry.


No need to be in Spanish, poetry is 

found in all languages, cultures, and 

roots, but I see the dead tree without

the fruits of your labor.

 

"Where is the honor of being called

poets and artists? Your smiles obscure

the sun and the page lonely awaits for

your cherish to shine in the Central

Valley.

 

What is the fear of writing here in a 

page made just for you, just for me?


Do not say you do not have time,

because for love there is always time,

or simply with just the name you are 

satisfied?

 

Your smiles are gone in the wind, I

feel I am the only poet who can write

this without complaint or vigor.


I would like to read the words that 

turned your cries into songs of passion! 

I wish I had more conversations with

poets, but I feel some do not have

words to convey - "


Or is it that you are better than me? and

I am a lost bullet with no name, wasting

my time in sharing my best and worst

moments.

 

Here you will find artists with paintings

and drawings expressing their lives, but

see that time takes away the desire to

share.


Unfolding before my eyes is the

development of the last days of poetry;

not mine, but yours!

 

If I could change the pages name it woud

read: 'The Poet of the Central Valley; He

who loves Poetry in Spanish and his

followers!"

 

I would like for you to take this challenge

as inspiration to live and share your hard

work and dedication; 


Do not forget where you came from,

because wherever you are now with your

hard work and dedication your efforts 

began in empty pages like this. In lifeless

canvases.

 

It is not the fame, nor money why an artist

gets lost; the memory lost of their beginnings

separates the truth from reality.


Without an audience we are just puppets of

art; you never know who your breath can

inspire.


Art is not greedy, why must the Artist? "

Author's Notes/Comments: 

A challenge to fellow poets and artist! 

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grandmomof3's picture

I would like

Loved this. Just seemed to really pump me up. Like a pep rally....nice, encouraging words! Thx. :)

Morningglory's picture

Well, I know I'm not better

Well, I know I'm not better than you. But I'd be happy to have a conversation. Especially if it's poetic. ;p 

I enjoy your work...


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SoulKritiC's picture

Your awesome

Well thank you very much, and yes please anytime, a poetic conversation would be great, this is how great minds convery and start thinking alike..through conversation! I appreciate the time you take to read my work, it means alot! =)


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